Stars: White Dragon Circle
by White Mountains And Deep Forests
About This Novel
The place of mysterious rings, the place where the stars shine, the place abandoned by the gods; A white dragon, carrying a will that does not belong to this world, carrying the last wishes and broken memories of the previous dragon god before his death, awakened... In this life, he will incarnate as the supreme god, lead mankind to conquer the stars and the sea, cultivate dependents, resist alien gods, and re-create the law of the ring that belongs exclusively to the ancient dragon god; I vow to sit in the center of the universe, overlook the creatures in the universe, calm the anger of the gods, and control the ups and downs of all things. (Keywords: Alien Beast Style, Cthulhu, Immutable Man, Longwen)
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Official(1)Scraped 10d ago
The subject matter is quite new, but it's pretty good
However, the writing is a bit complicated. It can be said that the progress is not much, but the number of words is a lot, 130,000 words. The progress is a bit too slow. It can be replaced by a few sentences. The reincarnation of a dragon discovers that he is a god, but is targeted by other gods, so he defeats a god, becomes a little stronger, and then spreads the faith. If it were other words, I can tell two or three paragraphs of the story, and it is just right to the climax. But this one can only be said to be too cumbersome and a bit unnecessary. If you don't read it after a while, you will feel that you will completely forget it and will only remember the progress just mentioned. Others can be said to be of little use. To put it bluntly, it is just like not watching it. After all, you are here to read the story, not the description. I suggest you write it more concisely? Otherwise it would be too complicated. Telling a story in a novel does not need to be so complicated. It will only reduce the audience.
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Community(0)
Official(1)Scraped 10d ago
The subject matter is quite new, but it's pretty good
However, the writing is a bit complicated. It can be said that the progress is not much, but the number of words is a lot, 130,000 words. The progress is a bit too slow. It can be replaced by a few sentences. The reincarnation of a dragon discovers that he is a god, but is targeted by other gods, so he defeats a god, becomes a little stronger, and then spreads the faith. If it were other words, I can tell two or three paragraphs of the story, and it is just right to the climax. But this one can only be said to be too cumbersome and a bit unnecessary. If you don't read it after a while, you will feel that you will completely forget it and will only remember the progress just mentioned. Others can be said to be of little use. To put it bluntly, it is just like not watching it. After all, you are here to read the story, not the description. I suggest you write it more concisely? Otherwise it would be too complicated. Telling a story in a novel does not need to be so complicated. It will only reduce the audience.
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