Douluo: the Phoenix God Descends and the Emperor's Flame Burns the Sky

The first point is that Ma Xiaotao is not born with the ultimate fire The second point is that Shui Binger is at least two years older than Tang San and three years older than the protagonist. The third point is that Shui Binger is not born with full soul power. If the original character had full soul power, it would be mentioned. For example, Feng Xiaotian, if it is not mentioned, it is definitely not the case. The fourth point is that Shui Bing'er is not the Ultimate Ice. Her ice ability is similar to that of Dou Er Ling Luochen, which is completely different from Huo Yuhao's Ultimate Ice (during the Ultimate Ice Competition, Tang San was probably frozen to death directly, rather than relying on martial soul fusion skills to break him)

The reading data of the new book issue will determine the life or death of a book. I hope readers will persist in reading it. In addition, the elements of this book include: [Phoenix Evolution] + [Multiple female protagonists, emotional flow] + [Three tortures of torture]. The reason why I chose this theme is that I feel that the phoenix in Douluo is too crotch-heavy and is simply a loser. "A phoenix cannot live unless it is a parasol tree, it cannot eat unless it is a bamboo tree, and it cannot drink unless it is a sweet spring spring." It is a sacred beast in mythology, symbolizing the noble image of being unyielding and holding oneself straight to death. It is impossible to drink dirty water and sleep in a chicken coop. So I plan to write a Fire Phoenix that is completely different from Ma Hongjun. Finally, the author's ability is limited, his writing skills are shallow, and his writing skills are not good enough.

The quality of the writer's thinking and writing style is not high. The quality of some readers is not high. The two go in both directions. Earn a score of 9.0.

It starts off clean and self-contained, but it becomes ambiguous within a few chapters. In addition, this is a novel with multiple female protagonists, and the martial spirit is still a phoenix, a loyal bird. Although Ma Hongjun starts off very strangely, but in the end he becomes a god and only thinks about one person. The protagonist is completely opposite. In the beginning, he is clean and self-sufficient, loving others and loving himself, but later on there are many female protagonists! I can only say it's hard to comment. The author is as arrogant as the protagonist. He only sees what he wants to see and only responds to what he wants to respond to. Most of the articles at the beginning recommended a single heroine setting, but the author himself wanted to have multiple heroines, so he just turned a blind eye and didn't reply to any of them. In the end, he still wrote multiple heroines. He also said that it caters to the market, laughs to death, goodbye, I'm leaving

First of all, I want to support you. It's better to have a single heroine. Comparatively, they all say that they are clean and self-sufficient. And the second one is quite disgusting. Happy New Year to everyone. Happy New Year to everyone.

The author is really writing random things. Learn more about the original work and don't start writing random things after reading a few fan books. About Wuhun A defective martial spirit will definitely not be born with full soul power. Let's take the Evil Fire Phoenix as an example. Because there is a malignant mutation of the evil fire, it cannot be full of soul power when awakened. At most, it will be born with level 9 like Ma Hongjun. 2. A martial soul born with full soul power must have no flaws. You must know that full soul power represents perfection. 3. Shui Bing'er's Ice Phoenix Spirit in the original work is also flawed. About properties 1. Even if the evil fire problem is solved, the Evil Fire Phoenix will not reach the ultimate fire attribute because the martial spirit itself does not have the ultimate fire attribute. About Dou Er Ma Xiaotao has the ultimate fire attribute and evolved from the grass jelly. There is also extreme fire and ice that cannot avoid poison.

I feel like the author has become a little more biased lately. It's about shaping the character of the protagonist. At the beginning, it gave people the impression that Ma Hongjun was being compared. It was used to highlight the noble character of the protagonist, but later it turned out that the protagonist was not very noble. It's because he looks down on vulgar fans. I only like high-end beauties. In fact, this is nothing. It's okay to have a harem. But the more I looked at it, the more something was wrong. What is the difference between you, the author, and other Douluo fans? Why are you starting to miss Tang San's biological mother? It doesn't matter if you want to change to another Douluo fan. But your initial setting is that Phoenix has a noble temperament. How could he do such a thing as stealing someone's mother? The Eye of Ice and Fire and other opportunities don't matter, they are all things without an owner. No matter how much you want to torture the third person, can you please not conflict with your character? There's a huge sense of fragmentation. You should abuse the third person from a moral perspective. You should not do things that are against morality and abuse the third person again. What is the difference between this style and Tang San? Hypocrites show one thing on the outside but another behind the scenes.

This novel of yours is finished at the end of the book! Typical strong branches and weak stems (less than 1/4.5 Of the main drama, all of which are daily romances) What you wrote is a Douluo fanfic, and it's not original. Why do you have to complain about a bunch of original content? The plot seems to be very procrastinating (most of the people who read your works have read the original Douluo work. You analyze a bunch of things and explain why you write it like this? How reasonable is it? And then you don't have your own originality, so you copy some Douluo's skills and content and splice them into ancient times. Apart from being procrastinating, the poetry doesn't really contribute much to the plot of this novel. You still want to claim that this is foreshadowing. You've all read Douluo's original work. You're a second-generation creator. You're not original. Are you complaining so much? Then I read a lot of comments, and they all said that your book is about a harem, a harem, a harem, etc. 😉 There is a single girl in the early stage and multiple girls in the later stage. I really don't blame the readers for this, because this is a fact😓 Of course I don't care how many girls you have, but your daily life is too much nonsense, and it doesn't help advance the plot at all. It's not what the author likes😅 It's like a romance novel, giving the protagonist a gentleman's persona is so self-contained😂 As a result, a bunch of girls surround the protagonist to create a weak harem. If you look carefully, you will find that your daily life is spent with a group of women, whether it is an older aunt or a younger lolita. Except for an old man, except for a small amount of advancement of the plot, you just write all kinds of daily flirtations and evolutions over and over again. Although you are not with him. Hey hey hey, but you are like a weak harem🙄 Are you writing a Douluo fan story, or are you writing romance novels and evolution in Douluo's skin😥 (I won't talk about the combat power 😂 various evolutions, all kinds of bragging, fighting and grinding 😂 It seems that the protagonist is very weak)

The moral level is too high. I would rather die than go to whoring. How should you write it later? If you are even a little unbalanced, your entire book's character will collapse. This is the first time I saw the author choose a collapse opening for himself. If the subsequent plot is not up to standard, it will be purely to disgust people.

Sorry. You're the first person I've ever read a chapter and then didn't want to read anymore. The first chapter is so disgusting and the last two sentences are simply the finishing touch. No matter how you write it later. No one is interested in watching it. The author started writing books before he graduated from elementary school. In other words, you are only 8 years old now.