Beginning to Become an Immortal from Lizhu Cave Heaven
by A Hamster
About This Novel
Traveling to the world of Jianlai, the male protagonist Su Chang knows the plot, the female protagonist Baoping, and the female supporting characters Li Liu, Xiu Xiu, and Ning Yao. Come to Haoran World, walk farther, see more scenery, and meet more people! Gather the hearts of one person and the hearts of tens of thousands of people, and spread the fire of a prairie fire with your heart and mind, so that people on the mountain will no longer look down from a high place and cause harm to mortals! The character designs collapsed in the later stages of the original book, so some secondary designs were used to adapt and complete the plot. I would like to write this book to the world of swords that we have longed for. Book club group: 187831285
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Official(116)Scraped 7d ago
Brother, the writing style of the original work is better. Why don't you just copy it? It's outrageous. The plot is exactly the same as the original work. Chen Pingan, who has changed his name, has gone through the same old path again without any changes. It cannot be said that it is the same, it can only be said that it is exactly the same.
Thank you for your support and I hope you will forgive me.
Old book friends all know that Shu Shu has been feeling unwell since the National Day. It was because of occupational disease and gastrointestinal discomfort that I had to vomit every few days. I was given injections and medicines, and the doctor asked me to rest. But I'm too embarrassed to ask for leave. I have already redeemed all the leave requests today and am planning to sleep all day. But I saw so many book friends voting. I got up and started writing again. The update time is unstable, causing trouble to everyone. Please forgive me. At the same time, thank you friends for your long-term support. Thank you. I will try my best to respond.
Better than the original work! ! In the final analysis: the sage should talk about "benevolence" and "education without distinction"; the lesser sage should talk about "righteousness" and "human nature is inherently good"; However, Taoism rules by doing nothing, and the Qi Practitioner Sect kills, arrests, and trades vegetation and monsters at will. "I" Li Er jumped up in the coffin with anger when he saw it! There is also no Mahayana Buddhism at all, it is all Hinayana. The great sage will give the manager a stick when he sees it. How can he be so insulting about traveling to the west to obtain scriptures? And Emperor Zhenwu actually reincarnated into a murderous, violent, and shameless person! I really don't want to talk about other prototypes! So please don't tj, in this fanfic, I see red, that is...
Keep up the good work, I look forward to Su Chang enjoying the blessings of everyone
Just like watching the original work, the plot has almost no changes from the original work, but the names of the individuals have been changed.
To be honest, I really would rather not accept Yao.
Shushu has been seriously ill these past two days.
It's the end of the year. There may be an outbreak of influenza near Shushu's home. Shushu got infected and has been fetching water for several days. But Shushu will work hard to update. Yesterday, my heart hurt and the number was 6000. Try to keep it up. If there is really not much, friends, please forgive me and let Shushu recover.
The writing is very good, but don't accept Ning Yao
As a Jianlai fan, I actually hope that there will be three female protagonists (please don't criticize)
Do you think this is a harem or three heroines? Or is it a single female protagonist Aquarius?
Will Ruan Xiu, Li Liuning and Yao accept it? I looked a little confused.
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Official(116)Scraped 7d ago
Brother, the writing style of the original work is better. Why don't you just copy it? It's outrageous. The plot is exactly the same as the original work. Chen Pingan, who has changed his name, has gone through the same old path again without any changes. It cannot be said that it is the same, it can only be said that it is exactly the same.
Thank you for your support and I hope you will forgive me.
Old book friends all know that Shu Shu has been feeling unwell since the National Day. It was because of occupational disease and gastrointestinal discomfort that I had to vomit every few days. I was given injections and medicines, and the doctor asked me to rest. But I'm too embarrassed to ask for leave. I have already redeemed all the leave requests today and am planning to sleep all day. But I saw so many book friends voting. I got up and started writing again. The update time is unstable, causing trouble to everyone. Please forgive me. At the same time, thank you friends for your long-term support. Thank you. I will try my best to respond.
Better than the original work! ! In the final analysis: the sage should talk about "benevolence" and "education without distinction"; the lesser sage should talk about "righteousness" and "human nature is inherently good"; However, Taoism rules by doing nothing, and the Qi Practitioner Sect kills, arrests, and trades vegetation and monsters at will. "I" Li Er jumped up in the coffin with anger when he saw it! There is also no Mahayana Buddhism at all, it is all Hinayana. The great sage will give the manager a stick when he sees it. How can he be so insulting about traveling to the west to obtain scriptures? And Emperor Zhenwu actually reincarnated into a murderous, violent, and shameless person! I really don't want to talk about other prototypes! So please don't tj, in this fanfic, I see red, that is...
Keep up the good work, I look forward to Su Chang enjoying the blessings of everyone
Just like watching the original work, the plot has almost no changes from the original work, but the names of the individuals have been changed.
To be honest, I really would rather not accept Yao.
Shushu has been seriously ill these past two days.
It's the end of the year. There may be an outbreak of influenza near Shushu's home. Shushu got infected and has been fetching water for several days. But Shushu will work hard to update. Yesterday, my heart hurt and the number was 6000. Try to keep it up. If there is really not much, friends, please forgive me and let Shushu recover.
The writing is very good, but don't accept Ning Yao
As a Jianlai fan, I actually hope that there will be three female protagonists (please don't criticize)
Do you think this is a harem or three heroines? Or is it a single female protagonist Aquarius?
Will Ruan Xiu, Li Liuning and Yao accept it? I looked a little confused.
