At the Beginning, Shinji Gave Me the Elf

This article is overall qualified. The protagonist Shiraishi was born in Futaba Town and is Xiaoguang's hometown. At the beginning, his parents worshiped the gods. He was unable to conquer Pokémon on his own. He picked up M'koel, which Shinji didn't want, and began to travel in the Sinnoh region as the initial Pokémon, gradually becoming bigger. The structure of the story is very simple. Although Pokémon is hard to come by, this article is not like some Guapi articles, which set out in the fairy tale-like Pokémon world such as those who have no money are not qualified to raise Pokémon; alliance monopoly Pokémon has a dark heart; ordinary people are often killed by Pokémon. Instead, it implements the spirit of the original work - everyone can pursue their dreams, including the insect-catching boy and the fishing boy. Even if it's just a green caterpillar and a Rattata, pursue your dreams. Then, although the protagonist is cheating, it is not too big, and the process of conquering Pokémon is relatively realistic. For example, if you want to trap a bear, you will give up immediately after you find that you can't afford it. Even if there were other Pokémon later that I was sure to defeat, I never thought of going back to conquer them again. Because it is enough and there is no need. The tamed Pokémon may be reckless, timid, or lazy. In short, each has its own shortcomings. If you click on the comments, there will be a lot of cruel comments, such as why you keep it when you are fishing like this, if you lose it, you will get another one... Or if you don't have a long memory and have no future, you don't know why you keep it... Fortunately, the protagonist is not so utilitarian, but more like the original Xiaozhi, tolerant and understanding of the innate personality of Pokémon, and strives to make progress with them. For example, when Deer has failed in many competitions, the protagonist just reduces the number of times he plays and lets him do the work he likes more, such as supervising the training of other Pokémon. As a result, the relationship between the two continues to improve. When encountering real danger, Jingantulu will take the initiative to take risks and go against his own character to run away with the protagonist. I think this tone is good. The plot refers to the original work but does not imitate the original work. Most of the time I travel by myself, socialize with the original characters from time to time, and stay on the edge of the plot. I often tell readers about the plot time points through a few pieces of news seen in newspapers. But the protagonist himself is not involved and has his own independent ideas, but the overall story is a mess and lacks a main line. The final result is that the protagonist can't beat the regional champion, and the Four Heavenly Kings have not beaten any of them, and they have to go back to their hometown to live peacefully in the finale. Keep your three views correct, and don't get too hung up on rare Pokémon, or be obsessed with opportunism. For example, I tried to intercept Hu Xiaozhi, but gave up after the other party still liked Xiaozhi more, and then no longer tried to rely on the original plot to steal Xiaozhi's opportunities. Instead, he prefers to conquer the Pokémon that suits him openly, then treat it with sincerity and train hard. Most of the Pokémon he conquered also had average qualifications. For example, Muckel didn't have any good skills. After the evolution of Earth Dragon Brother, he had the regular two knots instead of the one-hundredth three knots. Mongoose Slash was good at claw attacks but was only good at a little bit at the cost of long-range moves. It was completely useless. Divine beasts and other things were not good in the early stage. Existence, I caught Magikarp very self-awarely and couldn't get Gyarados to release it. The heterochromatic Pokémon caught an Alidos, who was the leader of the group near my home. I didn't see many rare Pokémon in the early days. I got a bunch of fossils and didn't think about reviving them and just exchanged them for money. You won't lose when you fight with a tough guy, and you lose and you win when you fight against the strong. What's worth criticizing is that he likes to be so anxious when one loses and the other wins. The purpose of the battle is to focus on exchanges and exchanges like in the anime. Even if they compete with villains like Team Galaxy, the two sides will basically not be so dark that they hope to kill each other or the other side's Pokémon, but will just stop at "defeating". In short, it is more realistic, without any rare treasures or heaven-dropped opportunities. Most of it still depends on hard work. The protagonist's character is also steady and down-to-earth. The above are all advantages, but there are also many disadvantages: 1. There is a big problem with sentence segmentation and the misuse of commas. Just imitate it - why, must, speak like this? 2. The writing style is limited and the narrative part is dry. 3. The plot is flat and straightforward, watchable but not exciting. There are some repetitions and no suspense. Apart from training, it is just fighting. 4. There is a lack of shaping of the Pokémon world and the perspective is too single. 5. Lack of enough features, some relying too much on game settings, such as features and attributes 6. The sounds of Pokémon. If you want to say that Pikachu calls Pika Pika, it's normal, but Pikachu calling Pika Pika is very abstract, you know? The shortcomings do not hide the good points, and overall it is acceptable. It is a fairy tale told seriously, and the length is just right, neither too long nor too short.

The protagonist is Tang San, right? Shinji gave you elves, and you crazily belittled Shinji.

The more I watch, the more uncomfortable I feel. All the elves collected by the protagonist are sick. It's just one. Who can bear it if they are all sick?

. . Me too, I too, Wangfeng girls, went to my idol traineeship together

The dialogue feels weird every time I watch it. The protagonist is the self-centered Long Aotian type.

I feel like the protagonist will conquer the normal alpacas later on.

The personality of the elf depends on the master. One elf becomes a middle-aged man. I feel that the protagonist conquers all the elf with problems. The more I look at it, I feel aggrieved. The elf is not powerful.

The content is very interesting, please work hard to update it😀

I can really increase my score. I'm really speechless when I look at the score in the comment section.

Anchor, I hope the heroine of this book is a Pokémon. If the heroine is a Pokémon, that would be great. I hope the heroine is Mew. To be honest, my xp is Mew. So if I can really let Pokémon be the heroine, I hope Mew will be one of them. I hope that the Pokémon of the protagonist will not betray the protagonist. I want the protagonist to have power himself and not just rely on the power of Pokémon. Come on, author, continue to update and never end. What I just said is true. Please anchor, help me realize these wishes.