
Original God: the Wind of Another World
About This Novel
The new book "Genshin Impact: The Two Pathetic Phantom Thieves" has been released "Buy one monument, get one monument free", the quirky girl's slogan makes people laugh. "You took my position, and I will bear this grudge." "Oh... Really, you disturbed my drinking mood, and I will also bear this grudge." The young man replied playfully, which surprised the vengeful blue-haired girl. The travel story doesn't end there. The immortals of the ancient country, the memory of the rock, the Mondstadt of the Free City, and the dandelions. When the wind blows on the face, it also pushes people's footsteps. The wind of another world is full of stories.
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Official(28)Scraped 7d ago
A self-made work by a Genshin Impact player
The Adventurer's Association is 10 square meters. Think about it with your poor brain. What can be done in such a small place? Can it be used by adventurers in the entire Liyue? Is it possible that there are only a few adventurers in the entire Liyue? Not to mention the game, it can be resurrected in the game. Mondstadt City is more than 3,000 meters away from Liyue Port, six miles away, and the total is not as big as a county seat.
Are you explaining?
Even if the pace is slow in the first 10 chapters, you can still read it. After 10 chapters, Guang Wan Min Tang will have a lot of bbs and there is no progress. How about a chapter of Slime? You're really good. I'd like to give you some advice. Don't talk so much. You're writing a novel, not a commentary. It's really stiff. Be more natural.
There are a bit too many lines
I remember that Yura's hatred appeared too frequently, and it was very uncomfortable to watch it too much.
No poking, no poking, it's so beautiful.
Whether the author is going to play or the two novels there, I feel that the writing is very good. I quickly stopped updating that book. Hey, over there, um, I finished reading it. I finished reading it in one day. Write faster.
Emma, this is such a novice again!
It's so watery. For a small thing, the author can keep writing about it! I was so tired of looking at it that I slipped away.
plot
Logically speaking, Hu Tao should know that he has passed 500 years, and he knows about Qiqi, so there are flaws, but the plot is good so far, come on
The main character is a waste
It's not enough to kill people, it's not enough to cripple people, how about just kicking them? Rubbish
Ocean, you are all water.
I just wrote a chapter about beating slimes. The author is really awesome
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Community(0)
Official(28)Scraped 7d ago
A self-made work by a Genshin Impact player
The Adventurer's Association is 10 square meters. Think about it with your poor brain. What can be done in such a small place? Can it be used by adventurers in the entire Liyue? Is it possible that there are only a few adventurers in the entire Liyue? Not to mention the game, it can be resurrected in the game. Mondstadt City is more than 3,000 meters away from Liyue Port, six miles away, and the total is not as big as a county seat.
Are you explaining?
Even if the pace is slow in the first 10 chapters, you can still read it. After 10 chapters, Guang Wan Min Tang will have a lot of bbs and there is no progress. How about a chapter of Slime? You're really good. I'd like to give you some advice. Don't talk so much. You're writing a novel, not a commentary. It's really stiff. Be more natural.
There are a bit too many lines
I remember that Yura's hatred appeared too frequently, and it was very uncomfortable to watch it too much.
No poking, no poking, it's so beautiful.
Whether the author is going to play or the two novels there, I feel that the writing is very good. I quickly stopped updating that book. Hey, over there, um, I finished reading it. I finished reading it in one day. Write faster.
Emma, this is such a novice again!
It's so watery. For a small thing, the author can keep writing about it! I was so tired of looking at it that I slipped away.
plot
Logically speaking, Hu Tao should know that he has passed 500 years, and he knows about Qiqi, so there are flaws, but the plot is good so far, come on
The main character is a waste
It's not enough to kill people, it's not enough to cripple people, how about just kicking them? Rubbish
Ocean, you are all water.
I just wrote a chapter about beating slimes. The author is really awesome















