Xiao Yu's Poems
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Leisure works in your spare time, don't like to accidentally enter. The author has little talent and knowledge, and I hope you can give me some advice.
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I think the author wrote it very well. One of the difficult aspects of writing ancient poetry is that it requires a lot of effort, including rhyme, contrast, and artistic conception. Let me briefly analyze the author's poems. There is no problem with the basic format. What about the artistic conception? I think firstly, the author's carefree artistic conception is very good. I am far behind it. I couldn't find the words to express it. Secondly, I think the author needs to expand the artistic conception. I feel that the author has the same artistic conception. Write more poems, so your poems will be limited to a small scope, not necessarily just about the aspects that the author writes about, such as friendship, love, and feelings about historical allusions. Third, I feel that the author can try the first two sentences to describe the scene + the last two lyric structures. I think it can be written well. Of course, the above are my personal opinions. I also have an account that I write casually called "Dream Gentleman". The work "Dream Like Light Smoke" is mixed with a few small poetry creations. You can also share it with me.
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Official(1)Scraped 8d ago
Communicate with the author
I think the author wrote it very well. One of the difficult aspects of writing ancient poetry is that it requires a lot of effort, including rhyme, contrast, and artistic conception. Let me briefly analyze the author's poems. There is no problem with the basic format. What about the artistic conception? I think firstly, the author's carefree artistic conception is very good. I am far behind it. I couldn't find the words to express it. Secondly, I think the author needs to expand the artistic conception. I feel that the author has the same artistic conception. Write more poems, so your poems will be limited to a small scope, not necessarily just about the aspects that the author writes about, such as friendship, love, and feelings about historical allusions. Third, I feel that the author can try the first two sentences to describe the scene + the last two lyric structures. I think it can be written well. Of course, the above are my personal opinions. I also have an account that I write casually called "Dream Gentleman". The work "Dream Like Light Smoke" is mixed with a few small poetry creations. You can also share it with me.
