
Ancestors: Starting with Gwen Spider-man
by Claude Clown
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Peter traveled to the Marvel world and became Peter Parker, and he was heartbroken. He likes Spider-Man but doesn't want to be Spider-Man. Little Spider has been losing his whole life, losing his parents, Uncle Ben, Aunt May, and his girlfriend. It seems that only a tragic life experience can bring out the romance of a hero. But what makes Peter even more desperate is that he can't even be Spider-Man! The world already has another Spider-Man, his childhood sweetheart Gwen Stacy, Gwen Spider-Man. And he is the relative and friend who was sacrificed by Gwen Spider-Man in the beginning... At this time, [Ding! The motherland template has been loaded for you] Huh? People from the motherland? Ancestors! ...
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Official(145)Scraped 7d ago
You don't have any original characters at all, and you still use the name of your ancestors to cheat. Why don't you use the name of the Divine Spear Bureau?
Firefighters wearing the skin of the motherland
Looking at the title of the book, I thought it was about the ancestor's version of Superman. Who knew that after reading dozens of chapters, it was all about putting out fires and fighting criminals?
The main character's name is Peter
The protagonist's name is Peter, the protagonist's name is Peter, and his real name is Peter. Although I also like Little Spider, the name you use does not make you feel like a time traveler, and it has no sense of substitution.
Haha ^_^ Trash and retarded plot
You are already a mature author. Hurry up and learn from other authors. They update ten chapters a day, plus ten more chapters on mood, and more chapters to ensure both quality and quantity.
evaluate
Secondly, the body should not be exposed as much as possible without exposing the strength. The most efficient way to solve difficulties is always to solve the person who caused the difficulties. Hanging people on street lights or punching people is not a problem. The problem is that the author did not express the protagonist's mentality well. If the protagonist did these things, it can be assumed that the protagonist is a kid from China who has not adjusted his mentality well. Through the vision, the protagonist can call the perpetrator's mobile phone to report the location, or throw them all into the same place for the police to pick up, or tie them all to the train tracks out of spite and let the train collide with the gang. Peter Parker has very poor vision and character, so he is just a beginner in terms of knowledge. When Batman throws criminals into the police station, he mixes his connections and builds his own network. My comments are all idiots. If Bruce really wants to change Gotham, just use the Wayne Group to suppress the entire Gotham. Then send people from outside to take over the Gotham government, clean up all the criminals, and then improve the prestige of the law. Note that it is the law and not the government. People in the government may also be bad people. As for Spider-Man, the person who committed the crime must be a bad guy, and the police can't control it, so they just beat the super criminal to death, and the body is taken for scientific research, or if that doesn't work, it's cremated. Tm, all of them seek death because beating the protagonist will not put his life in danger. Let me ask you, if you are faced with a lunatic who beats sap, poisons, arrests relatives and threatens, if it doesn't work, it triggers a large-scale alarm in the city and calls out the army, and fights are either your death or mine. If you are stared at by such a guy, you will probably not be able to sleep peacefully. If you provoke him, you are a group of fools who think they can't die, so they do it with all their strength.
It can be said that he has nothing to do with the people of the motherland, and he also hides his true identity. You can just forget about Spider-Man. He is really not suitable.
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Official(145)Scraped 7d ago
You don't have any original characters at all, and you still use the name of your ancestors to cheat. Why don't you use the name of the Divine Spear Bureau?
Firefighters wearing the skin of the motherland
Looking at the title of the book, I thought it was about the ancestor's version of Superman. Who knew that after reading dozens of chapters, it was all about putting out fires and fighting criminals?
The main character's name is Peter
The protagonist's name is Peter, the protagonist's name is Peter, and his real name is Peter. Although I also like Little Spider, the name you use does not make you feel like a time traveler, and it has no sense of substitution.
Haha ^_^ Trash and retarded plot
You are already a mature author. Hurry up and learn from other authors. They update ten chapters a day, plus ten more chapters on mood, and more chapters to ensure both quality and quantity.
evaluate
Secondly, the body should not be exposed as much as possible without exposing the strength. The most efficient way to solve difficulties is always to solve the person who caused the difficulties. Hanging people on street lights or punching people is not a problem. The problem is that the author did not express the protagonist's mentality well. If the protagonist did these things, it can be assumed that the protagonist is a kid from China who has not adjusted his mentality well. Through the vision, the protagonist can call the perpetrator's mobile phone to report the location, or throw them all into the same place for the police to pick up, or tie them all to the train tracks out of spite and let the train collide with the gang. Peter Parker has very poor vision and character, so he is just a beginner in terms of knowledge. When Batman throws criminals into the police station, he mixes his connections and builds his own network. My comments are all idiots. If Bruce really wants to change Gotham, just use the Wayne Group to suppress the entire Gotham. Then send people from outside to take over the Gotham government, clean up all the criminals, and then improve the prestige of the law. Note that it is the law and not the government. People in the government may also be bad people. As for Spider-Man, the person who committed the crime must be a bad guy, and the police can't control it, so they just beat the super criminal to death, and the body is taken for scientific research, or if that doesn't work, it's cremated. Tm, all of them seek death because beating the protagonist will not put his life in danger. Let me ask you, if you are faced with a lunatic who beats sap, poisons, arrests relatives and threatens, if it doesn't work, it triggers a large-scale alarm in the city and calls out the army, and fights are either your death or mine. If you are stared at by such a guy, you will probably not be able to sleep peacefully. If you provoke him, you are a group of fools who think they can't die, so they do it with all their strength.
It can be said that he has nothing to do with the people of the motherland, and he also hides his true identity. You can just forget about Spider-Man. He is really not suitable.
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I found it by scanning the list, which is okay. Marvel fandom. The protagonist is reborn as Peter Parker in Gwen's Spider-Man world. According to the original history, Peter Parker would turn into a lizard and eventually die in Gwen's arms. But after all, there is a system that directly transforms him into Parker's version of Dark Super and becomes an anti-hero. So far, the Green Goblin, Lizard Man, Iron Man and Electro plots have been completed. Why read this book: The title Ancestor is basically a gimmick to follow the trend, and it has little to do with the plot. It is essentially an anti-hero version of Superman who ignores moral kidnapping. The Invincible genre collapses so easily, and some people still watch it because it's fun. The writing style is okay, the emotional scenes with the heroine are also good, and I am good at writing heart-warming daily routines. Why not read this book: After reading this chapter, it seems that some people reported that the plot direction is similar to that of the other book. Secondly, the plot has basically not changed much. It is obvious that the protagonist takes action but then it becomes the same again. I personally don't like this lazy and trouble-free routine. Generally speaking, between grain and grass-to grain and grass, the evaluation will be revised depending on the situation in the future.




Currently it is a Marvel fanfic, an invincible article. It is quite enjoyable so far. After all, Marvel is also poorly written. Nine out of ten are firefighters. I hope the author can write some different plots.




Peter traveled to the Marvel world and became Peter Parker, and he was heartbroken. He likes Spider-Man but doesn't want to be Spider-Man. Little Spider has been losing his whole life, losing his parents, Uncle Ben, Aunt May, and his girlfriend. It seems that only a tragic life experience can bring out the romance of a hero. But what makes Peter even more desperate is that he can't even be Spider-Man! The world already has another Spider-Man, his childhood sweetheart Gwen Stacy, Gwen Spider-Man. And he is the relative and friend who was sacrificed by Gwen Spider-Man in the beginning... At this time, [Ding! The motherland template has been loaded for you] Huh? People from the motherland? Ancestors! ...




Evaluation: Current food and grass Ancestor template, but soon upgraded to a genuine superman, but Pig's Foot is still an ancestor and a happy person. In the world view of the Marvel Cinematic Universe, the earth is almost invincible. Except for Odin and a certain bald mage. The author really gave Superman a template, instead of giving it a title and then searching and upgrading it. Moreover, he has a superhuman body and an ancestral heart. But this kind of nearly invincible article will be difficult to write later. It's not easy to open new maps, but I always hang out with novices. After a few times, the feeling of fun is greatly reduced, even if I play 13. See what the author writes.




















