A Low-key Cultivating Family
About This Novel
In a world where monsters and monsters are rampant, a world of intrigues, a family of cultivators joins a group to keep themselves warm. They gradually become stronger while hiding in a low-key manner. They don't seek speed, but only seek stability. There is no system, no talent, only unwavering determination and meticulous care, allowing the male protagonist to reach the top step by step!
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Official(2)Scraped 21d ago
The preliminary preparation is too long, especially the introduction of the background. The protagonist appears too slowly here. If you are not a patient reader, you will be dissuaded from the beginning. My suggestion is to set up conflict points at the beginning. The first picture should introduce the protagonist and some minor troubles, and finally slowly reveal the background.
Watching the low-key cultivator come in
I would like to make a comment, as shown in the picture, in some paragraphs and sentences, the words are clearly spoken by the protagonist, but they are written as someone else's, which leads to a certain bad impression, and this has happened many times.
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Community(0)
Official(2)Scraped 21d ago
The preliminary preparation is too long, especially the introduction of the background. The protagonist appears too slowly here. If you are not a patient reader, you will be dissuaded from the beginning. My suggestion is to set up conflict points at the beginning. The first picture should introduce the protagonist and some minor troubles, and finally slowly reveal the background.
Watching the low-key cultivator come in
I would like to make a comment, as shown in the picture, in some paragraphs and sentences, the words are clearly spoken by the protagonist, but they are written as someone else's, which leads to a certain bad impression, and this has happened many times.
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