Elf: I Am a Farmer

[Dear author, if you are still alive, get out of here and write! ] [Author, are you still breathing? Please pick up your keyboard while you can still breathe, thank you. ] [Author, let me do the math with you. You code one word per second, which is 3600 per hour. There are 24 hours in a day. You sleep for six hours, eat for an hour, wash for an hour, and give you another hour for conception. With 15 hours left, you can code 54,000 words, and you can write 54,000 words in a day. So where is your manuscript? Let the donkey eat it? ]

Can the NPCs that appear be all girls? How can any normal animated novel be full of girls? I didn't even see a few boys after reading it. It's really awkward.

The writing of Mizuno Jew, a migrant worker who comes to help in the orphanage, is so unpleasant. What does he think of the protagonist? What kind of relationship does he have with the protagonist as a relative or friend? And he casually asks for the original elf Ao Guyan. Why is it that I came here to help the protagonist, but I insist on being a trainer? Do I have any qualifications?

You need to be qualified to write and have a level to be good-looking

. And the feeling your novel gives me, I can only say that it is quite satisfactory. To put it bluntly, it is the mean. Then I feel nothing. I was still a little interested in it at the beginning, but I seemed to be reading the article at the end. It gives people the feeling of an assembly line. Of course, I have nothing against your novel. That's it, I quit.

The plot of the orphanage is so disgusting, it should be about 7.8 Instead of 8.7

I feel like the ending is an explanation, and overall it's pretty good.

The name should be Piwa,

I have watched it for several days, and I have read most of the plot. I feel that it is very awkward to watch, and some things feel very deliberately written. The most impressive part is the part about digging up the super stone. I even said how difficult it is to find the super stone. Then on the last day, I asked the woman to dig up a fossil pterosaur stone, and gave away the resurrected fossil pterosaur directly. I don't understand why. Why is it so important to write about an NPC passerby who has no relationship and has not provided any help to the protagonist? Moreover, I am really not used to this kind of giving away good things as soon as they are given away. At least you can exchange them with others without saying what they are. I don't know how others feel when they see this. Anyway, after seeing this, I have no desire to continue reading. . . Another thing is that the characters here feel that others give things as a matter of course, and there is no rejection at all. Another is that the plot of the entire book is very bland. The protagonist basically does not think about conquering some rare or popular elves, and has no adventure experience. The occasional trips to other areas are done with a clear purpose, and there is no sense of surprise. The whole text is written in such a bland way.

Those people in the orphanage disgusted me so much. I felt that except for the grandma and the one who just came here, all of them were white-eyed wolves. It was so disgusting. The main character also knelt down and licked her. His farts had no effect. They provided food, shelter, and food for the fairies. They had to be complained about from time to time. I'm convinced. The main character is a pig.