Tokyo Entertainment Writer

If the copyist has copied the article, what does it have to do with you as a person? You value the friends around you. Even if one day you no longer have any golden fingers or copywriting skills, those who accompany you will still be with you. Just like everyone in real life, I still don't understand what noble things I am writing? Is this considered noble talk? Is there a problem with valuing friends, even if you are a rich or awesome person, but you still value your friends?

Chapter 67 Are you water? A time traveler writes a diary 6

Let me get over this plot quickly, wuwuwu, stop scolding (இдஇ; )

I had collected this book before and left a review, but then I stopped reading it and deleted the review. I came across this book again today. I don't know if the author can still read it, but I'd better leave a comment carefully and point out what I think is a bit awkward in the article. I hope the author can write better and better in the future. Say the good things first, then the bad things. Ovo I like the writing style of the whole text very much. This kind of writing is more daily and slow, which is very different from the fast food type writing. The author said that people have commented that it is very literary and youthful, so I think it is the literary youth that I like. At least I quite like this style. However, I was tired when I was chasing it and the plot felt a bit delayed, but I was still happy to watch it in one go. (乂｀д´) The male protagonist's setting of the text is a bit awkward, which makes it less enjoyable. Generally, there are two settings, one is the system flow and the other is the genius flow. But this book is not system-level, nor is it genius-level. I think the definition of genius is a bit high, and for me the male protagonist's actions didn't reach it. The most important thing is that the feeling of pleasure is low. There is no system for setting up the male protagonist. I just rely on memory to know the general outline of the novel. But there are many details in the original text. If I don't remember it clearly, is it really like that when written? And on top of this, the male protagonist also added a lot of his own writing style, which is really uncomfortable. Even the writing style is relatively low, and I want to find a girl from the literary club to write it as a ghostwriter. This is a super poisonous point. The time traveler writes a diary and exposes his identity. This plot is too lazy to complain about. Ovo Sometimes you can look at what you write from the perspective of a reader and think about whether you would feel poisonous after seeing this kind of plot? You can think about what you would do if you were in this situation at that time to feel comfortable? Of course, the above can only be said that I try my best to give suggestions. I don't know whether they are actually useful, but this is what I think, and I hope it will be useful. Because I really like this writing style, but when I first read it, some parts were really awkward, and I felt a bit pity when I saw the mistakes and the author's words. I wish the author good luck and success!

The author will listen to everyone's opinions when they see them. I have changed about ten details so far, and now I am planning to delete the useless parts of Chapters 9-14. But please be sensible. You can make comments and complain, but don't curse.

The author is too deceptive. The words are so mediocre that I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters! Too lazy to say it!

The update is discontinued, then I'm leaving, no more waiting🤠

Come on, update, I haven't read enough recent chapters😪

It looks good, please update soon.

But the relationship between the characters seems not to be handled well, it looks a bit () awkward Feeling good Pretty good, come on