Cat Warrior 1 Past and Present Life
by The Core Is Bright And The Smoke Is Bright
About This Novel
The pet cat Rosie did not expect that outside the owner's garden, deep in the quiet forest. There are four groups of wild cats: Thunder, Wind, Shadow, and River. Carrying the instructions of their samurai ancestors, they jointly rule the forest. Compete with each other for survival. What's even more unexpected is that this ordinary pet cat actually became an apprentice of Thunder Clan and was named White Claw. How will White Claw use courage and wisdom to overcome various difficulties and complete the greatest adventure in the prophecy? Please look forward to it
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Official(6)Scraped 7d ago
not very good
First: Not enough words What you are writing is just symbolic. On the surface it seems like a novel, but in fact it is just prose. Second: plot issues As an author, you must be responsible for your own work. The introduction of your novel seems to be very good, but in fact, it is called the article is not on topic. The outline you gave yourself is great, but your writing style cannot keep up. Third: Not enough details Have you ever written an essay? Even a composition can't be all dialogue, it's good to describe it in some detail.
what is this
At least, the number of chapters is too small, at least 20 chapters are needed. Secondly, even if Mars could smell that it was his relative, how would he know who it was? It's really unrealistic, she should be allowed to say it herself
I hope you can write better next time
You can write some plots after the original Cat Warrior, preferably not so short
Use cotton pads correctly and you can use them without using them. The best effect is the length of time you use them.
You cannot teach your children not to do something just because of a certain personality. O
The number of words is too few, only two or three pages, and there are too few environment descriptions, action descriptions, etc. Most of them are dialogues. How could the clan leader forget the cub's apprentice naming ceremony? And even the teacher didn't expect that Mars would say: "Tomorrow around three o'clock in the afternoon." In the world of Cat Warrior, there is no concept of time. The number of chapters is too few. It should be more than 20 chapters anyway. Come on💪
It feels like time is messed up. When Fireheart became Firestar, Sandpaw and Dustpaw both became warriors, right?
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Official(6)Scraped 7d ago
not very good
First: Not enough words What you are writing is just symbolic. On the surface it seems like a novel, but in fact it is just prose. Second: plot issues As an author, you must be responsible for your own work. The introduction of your novel seems to be very good, but in fact, it is called the article is not on topic. The outline you gave yourself is great, but your writing style cannot keep up. Third: Not enough details Have you ever written an essay? Even a composition can't be all dialogue, it's good to describe it in some detail.
what is this
At least, the number of chapters is too small, at least 20 chapters are needed. Secondly, even if Mars could smell that it was his relative, how would he know who it was? It's really unrealistic, she should be allowed to say it herself
I hope you can write better next time
You can write some plots after the original Cat Warrior, preferably not so short
Use cotton pads correctly and you can use them without using them. The best effect is the length of time you use them.
You cannot teach your children not to do something just because of a certain personality. O
The number of words is too few, only two or three pages, and there are too few environment descriptions, action descriptions, etc. Most of them are dialogues. How could the clan leader forget the cub's apprentice naming ceremony? And even the teacher didn't expect that Mars would say: "Tomorrow around three o'clock in the afternoon." In the world of Cat Warrior, there is no concept of time. The number of chapters is too few. It should be more than 20 chapters anyway. Come on💪
It feels like time is messed up. When Fireheart became Firestar, Sandpaw and Dustpaw both became warriors, right?
