Having a Taoist Temple in the Mountains Shocked the World

Typos (often there are, I don't care about you, there are many, but you don't change them), the first two women's writing is a mess, the one with the surname Hu, the protagonist is fighting snakes there, you are teasing a wolf (there is also a pot: a wolf is written like 🐕, make sure 🐕 is domesticated from generation to generation, even though you are a Taoist priest, you can't possibly make a (lone) What kind of wolf training is it? Not to mention that this wolf was once a wolf king, and you, a Taoist priest, are not the monks who are benefactors all day long. It's really boring. There is a lot of nonsense. It would probably make a big chapter. I only read the first part and wrote about snakes. Snakes are divided into venomous snakes and pythons. What are the characteristics of pythons? It's long, so hunting is mainly about strangulation. What is the characteristic of your python? How do you rank snakes? When I read your novel, I really think you don't check the information. There is an author next door who checks the information every day and writes about black technology. He has solved the Nantianmen Project and the Seven Millennium Mathematical Problems, including the Aklantis civilization. I came here to look up the information. We mentioned a lot of bad things, and he also changed some chapters. He specifically said it in the comments. Regardless of whether you regard writing novels as a hobby or as a profession to support your family, I still want you to do everything as a Taoist warrior. I really don't know what to do with it! Is the character a Taoist priest or a warrior? What her adoptive parents say is that they can't see through the protagonist. You want to see through it? It's nonsense! You can't tell whether it's the earth or a parallel world after watching it for a long time. Your writing is a bit too funny, isn't it? Readers are interested, we understand. It's not a place where you're in a deep mountain and old forest. The writing of the protagonist is a mess and the character is completely broken. How do you change it later? The foundation is broken. (You can also write like this, at least bring some people with you.) Ah, I just go to a mountain with wild beasts alone. I really don't understand it. A novel is a novel, and your underlying logic is gone. The anchor is not stupid, and people are not stupid. Who goes to climb a mountain without looking up information on the Internet and bringing things with you? You, the female anchor, don't bring anyone with you, and you only bring a mobile phone and a selfie stick after meeting the protagonist? Gao Xiang, who paid 000 yuan, left without paying and took an umbrella with her. It happened that it was thundering and raining, and then she fainted. Two people came to rescue her after she fainted. Hehe... What a coincidence. What a coincidence that her mother met Qiao's father. What a coincidence. What a coincidence. That's it. I've tried the poison on you, goodbye! Whether you want to watch it or not is up to you, bye!

There are too many funny novels nowadays, and they are not interesting at all.

I'm almost sick to death after reading the first chapter. What a rubbish book. A first-grade kid can write it better than you. Especially that girl is so fucking disgusting.

Are there any book friends who have read more than 40,000 hours or have more than 1,000 followers? Let's have a permanent relationship

Dialogue in the book! Is the protagonist a chuuni psychopath? It's completely unlike the state of mind of a cultivator. It looks like he's mentally ill.

Childish, childish, childish, childish, childish, childish, childish

You thought it was Buddhism! Also, donor, could you do some homework before writing the book?

I've been short of books for a long time. Taoist System Liu finally found a novel that makes me want to read it. Giao, I'm so excited.

That woman is so shameless. Are you used to this? What are you doing? Isn't this idle? You are so shameless. Can't you just tell them to get out?

The front is a bit bad, the middle is okay, and the back is particularly broken and misses the mark.