Xiaozhi, What Are You Doing?

This article has many references to Teacher Lu's book, such as becoming a host, magically transforming the Chinese region, various teams, etc. Let's talk about other places, the bond between elves. The description of the bond between Teacher Lu and the elves is perfect for this book, and the same goes for other descriptions. That is, the author of Beichuan Nanfeng's writing style is perfect. Also, the author said that the coal turtles are highly poisonous, which is a bit confusing. The author said that the coal turtles are highly poisonous in that version. Not to mention others, Reshiram is the Dragon of Truth. It's quite cruel for the protagonist to be recognized without even a little assessment. There is also the problem of the protagonist's character. He can't even stand the cynicism of black fans, so what kind of anchor are you? Since you can't stand it, you still have to act like it. Isn't that just mean?

It's no different if you write about elf cultivation in your hand than if you don't. The elf on your hand, where did the free prostitution bond come from? I don't ask you to be as passionate as Master Zhi. Your own elf is just like a fake. The bond with the mythical beast is even more bragging.

After reading two chapters, I knew this book was no better. The protagonist can even lose an elf, and he is said to be an excellent trainer. He also knows this champion and that doctor, and has been live streaming for several years. Why do you do that? If the author doesn't even bother to put in the effort, what good book can he write?

This book is very interesting. Although there are mythical beasts in it, it is not like other cool books. There are also many games mixed in, which is quite interesting.

For the sake of a better harmonious environment, the poisonous points mentioned have been corrected.

So far, everything looks good, but can there only be 4 skills in the competition? If so, I feel like I will be discouraged from quitting.

The description of the environment does not dare to be detailed. It makes people feel that the protagonist is limited to a frame at a glance. No book has the feeling of a world. The main point is that the purpose of the protagonist is not clear and he does whatever comes to mind. It gives people the feeling that he has skipped a few chapters and is still reading. The last point is It's the female protagonist issue. Gamers probably don't like movies without female protagonists. Most anime fans like Serena as a single female protagonist, but the protagonist's image is indeed the type that makes him cringe when he sees a woman. He claims that women are inferior to Pokémon and not as good as Taobao, but at the same time he just does that when he sees a girl. It's a bit disgusting.

1 Leshiram was raised by Xiaozhi, and he chose Xiaozhi himself. Why does he feel like a cat, and his trainer has become a poop shoveler? Generally trainers have a higher status, even if it is a mythical beast, it is uncomfortable to watch. 2. Kyurem is absolutely insane. Leshiram has been melted. He has 5 elves on his body, and two of the mythical beasts are not released to command other people's elves. The combat power of the Millennium Plane is not low, right? 10% Success rate. If you don't let the plane fly out, who is crazy if you're not? 3. The plane is similar to Leshiram, even worse than Leshiram. He fulfills his promise but fails to fulfill it completely. He is not obedient at all. How good and tolerable can Xiaozhi be? The author may want to add some humor, but it makes my kidneys hurt. It's very irritating. If it were me, the disobedient and unbound plane, I might as well replace it with an elf who is obedient and has good talent. I really don't know where your 9.6 Rating came from. Is it a brush?

Very well written.

I think it's very well written, please keep up the good work