Devour: Be Invincible Starting from the Selection System!

I can't stand it anymore. Among so many devouring fanfics, this one is the one I can't stand the most. The plot is too weird. I feel like the author just wants to write one thing at a time. There is no outline at all. Moreover, there are problems with the character writing and the protagonist's mentality. The protagonist even calls people "sir" at all times. "Thank you" and the like are full of sugar 💩. I suggest the author try it out before writing a fanfic next time. Go through the outline and read it yourself. Once you can read it, post it. , Otherwise it would feel like pure revenge against netizens.

It's strange that the author doesn't eat beef. He directly used the system to enter other universe countries, and even worshiped a living king who was immortal. (Outside works don't accept beef heroines because they are apprentices to Hu Yanbo) But I like it, hehe*^_^* But I have a suggestion, I don't know if the author will accept it (stay in this universe country for now, it doesn't matter whether you participate in the Genius War or not, after all, there is an immortal teacher named King Feng, who is just entering the virtual company, as long as King Feng applies for a special case. After the genius war is over, it will be better to meet them again, "it will be better to get to know each other again")

I saw a lot of comments today. Some said it was written by elementary school students, others said the plot was disgusting. There were many, many others who said it was pretty good. Let me reply here uniformly. The author is neither a professional nor an amateur. It is purely a personal hobby. I have never said how good my writing is or how rich the plot is. If you think the writing is poor and disgusting and you can't stand it, then you can turn left. You can comment here to say something disgusting and it will not affect it. I, the author, just write a few things that I like to read after work to pass the time. If you think it is okay, brothers who can read it can comment in the comment area and tell me what else you want to say. I will try to change it. Let me make it clear first that the author basically reads the comments, and also listens to those readers who do not follow the trend. 😇

There are some low-level mistakes in Chapter 2, just look at it

Inexplicable butterfly effect, forced modification?

I'm shit hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

This plot is completely ruined. In order to highlight the protagonist, a group of quasi-warriors are asked to face the beast tide. Author, can you read it?

Everyone will decide whether to read it after reading this comment. The beginning is directly poisonous. The protagonist's parents were killed by monsters, and the protagonist said "Although you are not my biological parents" (Note: Before reading this sentence, the author did not say that the parents of the protagonist in Swallowing the Stars adopted the protagonist, so I took it as Biological parents in Devouring), when I saw this, I didn't understand what the author wanted to express, but as a normal person, even if it is adopted, it has been raised for 17 years, and even a dog has been fed to maturity. This pure white-eyed wolf thing, here I deeply doubt the author's thinking.

I've read about a dozen chapters, and I think it's okay. It would be better if there were less inner monologues. Also, the progress is a bit fast.

Not bad, not bad, just sit back and wait to enter the universe later