Douluo: the Two Masters of Piano and Sword, the Start Scares Ning Fengzhi to Tears
by Dog-headed Military Division In The North Of The Village
About This Novel
Shuangwen＋harem+ When he woke up, Ning Luochen found that he had become the adopted son of the Qibao Glazed Sect and Ning Rongrong's nominal good brother. "Not the Seven Treasures Glazed Pagoda? What a pity..." Before he finished speaking, the Meteor Star Sword came out and cut off the test crystal! "Sword Martial Spirit? It's not bad..." Buzz! The piano sounds in the empty mountain, and the soul is restless! "Twin... Twin martial souls?!" "Wait! The soul power test ball... Exploded?!" Ning Fengzhi: (°Д°) Uncle Jian and Uncle Gu: Σ(っ °Д °;)っ Elders: (⊙?⊙) Innate level twenty! The twins of piano and sword! This start immediately frightened the sect leader! I wanted to develop in a low-key manner, but my strength did not allow it. Walking through the Star Dou Forest, killing soul beasts, falling off a cliff and picking up a million-year-old soul beast crying and begging to be used as a soul ring? Tianmeng Bingsi: "Boss! Take me to fly!"
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Official(3)Scraped 5d ago
There are too many faults, so I won't rate it. Let me tell you my evaluation first: Qin and Sword, Wuhun is good and a bit interesting, but your broken setting has a big poisonous point. 1. Only a hundred thousand year old soul beast can be sacrificed. Now you can sacrifice a thousand-year soul beast. It's unreasonable. Your setting is speeding up Douluo Continent. There is no need to wait for Dou San Dou Four to destroy the Soul Beast. According to your logic, in the timeline of Dou II, the soul beast is endangered, the soul master has no soul ring, and the Douluo Continent has perished. 2. Twin martial spirits cannot be used at the same time. The fanfics next door have written systems that allow the male protagonist to use his own martial soul fusion skills. , But it's not that the left and right hands release martial arts at the same time. This is too nonsense. If you want to set up twin martial spirits like this, wouldn't Tang San and Bibi Dong be strengthened? 3. Tianmeng Bingsi will not know the title Douluo on the mainland in Dou Yi's timeline. When it said Poison Douluo, I was confused when I saw it. It felt like a soul beast was running away and hiding. Don't you think it's outrageous that you can still inquire about people and things in the human world? The Tianmeng Iceworm in Dou Er's original work doesn't even know the people on the mainland. Your setting is still outrageous. It's full of flaws. There's no point in reading it. It's a waste of time for your fan-written martial arts. I don't want to talk about the other flaws. I've already said so much about the three flaws.
It's so fake, it's really fake, and it still feels indigenous.
The setting of your book is very good. I really like it. Don't stop updating it.
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Official(3)Scraped 5d ago
There are too many faults, so I won't rate it. Let me tell you my evaluation first: Qin and Sword, Wuhun is good and a bit interesting, but your broken setting has a big poisonous point. 1. Only a hundred thousand year old soul beast can be sacrificed. Now you can sacrifice a thousand-year soul beast. It's unreasonable. Your setting is speeding up Douluo Continent. There is no need to wait for Dou San Dou Four to destroy the Soul Beast. According to your logic, in the timeline of Dou II, the soul beast is endangered, the soul master has no soul ring, and the Douluo Continent has perished. 2. Twin martial spirits cannot be used at the same time. The fanfics next door have written systems that allow the male protagonist to use his own martial soul fusion skills. , But it's not that the left and right hands release martial arts at the same time. This is too nonsense. If you want to set up twin martial spirits like this, wouldn't Tang San and Bibi Dong be strengthened? 3. Tianmeng Bingsi will not know the title Douluo on the mainland in Dou Yi's timeline. When it said Poison Douluo, I was confused when I saw it. It felt like a soul beast was running away and hiding. Don't you think it's outrageous that you can still inquire about people and things in the human world? The Tianmeng Iceworm in Dou Er's original work doesn't even know the people on the mainland. Your setting is still outrageous. It's full of flaws. There's no point in reading it. It's a waste of time for your fan-written martial arts. I don't want to talk about the other flaws. I've already said so much about the three flaws.
It's so fake, it's really fake, and it still feels indigenous.
The setting of your book is very good. I really like it. Don't stop updating it.
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