
After Leaving the System, Everything Starts from China Entertainment
About This Novel
Ning Yan accidentally returned to his childhood, and he ran away from the system. What kind of problems will you face after entering the entertainment industry? That girl is like the gentle wind in the mountains Unknowingly, it blew into my heart...
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Official(12)Scraped 6d ago
Another stupid dog-licking story. Will Liu Yifei die if she doesn't lick her?
Single heroine Liu Yifei? ? ? Does anyone still read her novels now?
There are too many confrontations in the article and too much didactic space.
Ask the author, can Liu Yifei act in a serious drama? She is American nationality
There are many people discussing the issue of writing style
Many people say that there are too many metaphors and that literary youth affects reading. The author has seen this and will make some modifications in subsequent stories to reduce some metaphors and increase the sense of reading. Thank you for your suggestions.
There were many people who gave their opinions and had a brief chat.
I am a newbie, so I may not be able to write works that everyone will like to read. I don't like writing articles that are too vernacular. Some people may look uncomfortable. I apologize. If you like it, just leave it and take a look. If you want to support it, vote for it. If you don't like it, just slide it.
The writing style is youthful and the content is refreshing.
The content starts with a golden bear in the career, then a golden palm, a hundred chapters, a golden lion, and A and three golds. Those purely cool articles dare not write like this; in the emotional section, a hero saves a beauty once and then everything comes naturally, which is also very cool; But the writing style is very literary, and it feels difficult to read: it feels difficult to read every word, and you will definitely miss some useful information if you read ten lines at a glance.
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This book has been updated a lot since it was put on the shelves. The data is very poor. Maybe it is not well written, or maybe not many people like to read it. I thought about cutting it off, but then I thought better of it. It is a story written after work, and the author just thinks of it as weaving a different dream for himself. It doesn't matter if you watch it or not, we will continue to update it steadily. No need to ask for votes, since no one is voting anyway, it doesn't matter... If you have any comments you want to make, you can leave them below. If you don't want to listen, then we will consider adopting them...
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The concept is quite good, but the writing style is very "general" and the connection between the front and back is too stiff and awkward. For example, in the section about playing basketball, the text description is very light, the movements, expressions and even the description of the heart cannot be said to be without passion, it is completely "average", but at the end there is a self-pleasure of the protagonist, is it embarrassing? Also, before and after the Golden Bear Awards ceremony, you either write in detail about the reaction to the movie and the feedback from foreigners, or you give a rough summary. As a result, you are neither good nor bad. Don't you feel uncomfortable? In addition, let's not talk about the job arrangement after opening the office. How valuable is the deputy general manager? The relationship between superiors and subordinates is too casual. Even if you are a good social worker, let alone only get along for a few months, even if you have been with your boss for more than a few years, and no matter how friendly your boss is, you will not be able to face your boss so casually, or even make a show of it casually (for example, the financial officer throws the tax form in front of the boss at will), or while working? Anyway, I don't know if the author has started his own business or is it just the imagination of a cow horse? In short, I gave you three stars just because I was afraid that the author would not be able to accept two stars, so I deleted this suggestion.
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Official(12)Scraped 6d ago
Another stupid dog-licking story. Will Liu Yifei die if she doesn't lick her?
Single heroine Liu Yifei? ? ? Does anyone still read her novels now?
There are too many confrontations in the article and too much didactic space.
Ask the author, can Liu Yifei act in a serious drama? She is American nationality
There are many people discussing the issue of writing style
Many people say that there are too many metaphors and that literary youth affects reading. The author has seen this and will make some modifications in subsequent stories to reduce some metaphors and increase the sense of reading. Thank you for your suggestions.
There were many people who gave their opinions and had a brief chat.
I am a newbie, so I may not be able to write works that everyone will like to read. I don't like writing articles that are too vernacular. Some people may look uncomfortable. I apologize. If you like it, just leave it and take a look. If you want to support it, vote for it. If you don't like it, just slide it.
The writing style is youthful and the content is refreshing.
The content starts with a golden bear in the career, then a golden palm, a hundred chapters, a golden lion, and A and three golds. Those purely cool articles dare not write like this; in the emotional section, a hero saves a beauty once and then everything comes naturally, which is also very cool; But the writing style is very literary, and it feels difficult to read: it feels difficult to read every word, and you will definitely miss some useful information if you read ten lines at a glance.
Opinion post
If you have any opinions, you can mention them in this post.
Reading tips!
This book has been updated a lot since it was put on the shelves. The data is very poor. Maybe it is not well written, or maybe not many people like to read it. I thought about cutting it off, but then I thought better of it. It is a story written after work, and the author just thinks of it as weaving a different dream for himself. It doesn't matter if you watch it or not, we will continue to update it steadily. No need to ask for votes, since no one is voting anyway, it doesn't matter... If you have any comments you want to make, you can leave them below. If you don't want to listen, then we will consider adopting them...
personal understanding
The concept is quite good, but the writing style is very "general" and the connection between the front and back is too stiff and awkward. For example, in the section about playing basketball, the text description is very light, the movements, expressions and even the description of the heart cannot be said to be without passion, it is completely "average", but at the end there is a self-pleasure of the protagonist, is it embarrassing? Also, before and after the Golden Bear Awards ceremony, you either write in detail about the reaction to the movie and the feedback from foreigners, or you give a rough summary. As a result, you are neither good nor bad. Don't you feel uncomfortable? In addition, let's not talk about the job arrangement after opening the office. How valuable is the deputy general manager? The relationship between superiors and subordinates is too casual. Even if you are a good social worker, let alone only get along for a few months, even if you have been with your boss for more than a few years, and no matter how friendly your boss is, you will not be able to face your boss so casually, or even make a show of it casually (for example, the financial officer throws the tax form in front of the boss at will), or while working? Anyway, I don't know if the author has started his own business or is it just the imagination of a cow horse? In short, I gave you three stars just because I was afraid that the author would not be able to accept two stars, so I deleted this suggestion.









