I Am Casting the Foundation Alone
by Cornus Officinalis Outside The Pavilion
About This Novel
A young man with a congenital disease seeks to survive in all the worlds! The story of Romance, Snow and Moon, plus swordsmanship in the snow, is in progress. The RWBY volume has not been written yet, so you can skip it. One person builds the Tao foundation, the young man sings and sings the road ahead, the Tao tool is cast in the spiritual weapon, I meet you in rwby... The world we have walked through, under one person, the song of youth, the spirit of weapons, RWBY, the sword in the snow...
What Readers Think
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Community(0)
Official(50)Scraped 16d ago
He called me when I went to the Youth Song Hall
I'm drunk, I don't like Situ Qianluo very much, but I just want to write about Situ Qianluo!
Zhao Yuzhen Li Hanyi
The most pity is that Zhao Yuzhen and Li Hanyi hope that the author will not write the Dao Sword Immortal to death
five stars
The author is convinced, you really should write a female channel!
Shubuzi has begun, and the main heroine is here! ! ! If you like RWBY, hurry up
Shubuzi has begun, and the main heroine is here! ! ! If you like RWBY, hurry up
Too far
You said you were writing about a fight and it was long and you didn't say anything, but it would be too boring if you wrote it like this. Think about it, you have been writing about a fight for several weeks. I didn't mention it earlier, it was too corny and a bit disgusting, and the plot in the later stages was so boring.
Too many typos
Originally the writing was quite good and pretty, but there were so many typos that it was unbelievable and it was so uncomfortable to read. I hope the author can fix it and improve it.
Two points: The battle power is broken, so it's related. Not to mention it's the same as the original novel, but since you're using one person's world view, you have to abide by some of the most basic settings in it. It's not about killing gods or anything, it's called passion. Since you wrote this novel and published it, please respect the readers, okay? You're writing it too high, and the readers will feel uncomfortable. Also, there are too many typos and you won't correct them. Is this how you treat your hard work? To be honest, the only thing that attracted me to your book was the maternal love of the protagonist's mother towards the protagonist at the beginning, and the plot of their relationship, but there is one thing that is a bit too literary and the words are too gorgeous.
Author, you have a lot of typos, right?
The Heavenly Master doesn't know the protagonist and yet he still goes to great lengths to help him. How is that possible?
Rating
Community(0)
Official(50)Scraped 16d ago
He called me when I went to the Youth Song Hall
I'm drunk, I don't like Situ Qianluo very much, but I just want to write about Situ Qianluo!
Zhao Yuzhen Li Hanyi
The most pity is that Zhao Yuzhen and Li Hanyi hope that the author will not write the Dao Sword Immortal to death
five stars
The author is convinced, you really should write a female channel!
Shubuzi has begun, and the main heroine is here! ! ! If you like RWBY, hurry up
Shubuzi has begun, and the main heroine is here! ! ! If you like RWBY, hurry up
Too far
You said you were writing about a fight and it was long and you didn't say anything, but it would be too boring if you wrote it like this. Think about it, you have been writing about a fight for several weeks. I didn't mention it earlier, it was too corny and a bit disgusting, and the plot in the later stages was so boring.
Too many typos
Originally the writing was quite good and pretty, but there were so many typos that it was unbelievable and it was so uncomfortable to read. I hope the author can fix it and improve it.
Two points: The battle power is broken, so it's related. Not to mention it's the same as the original novel, but since you're using one person's world view, you have to abide by some of the most basic settings in it. It's not about killing gods or anything, it's called passion. Since you wrote this novel and published it, please respect the readers, okay? You're writing it too high, and the readers will feel uncomfortable. Also, there are too many typos and you won't correct them. Is this how you treat your hard work? To be honest, the only thing that attracted me to your book was the maternal love of the protagonist's mother towards the protagonist at the beginning, and the plot of their relationship, but there is one thing that is a bit too literary and the words are too gorgeous.
Author, you have a lot of typos, right?
The Heavenly Master doesn't know the protagonist and yet he still goes to great lengths to help him. How is that possible?
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