Immortality Martial Arts: Starting from Baduanjin
by Grasshopper
About This Novel
Li Fang traveled to the Li Xuan Dynasty, a world full of chaos and demons, and he was born with a frail body and mediocre martial arts qualifications. However, fate took a turn for the better, and Li Fang discovered that increasing his lifespan could unleash unlimited potential, and his talent and understanding increased accordingly. He practices Baduanjin to strengthen his body and avoid all diseases; he practices the golden toad looking at the moon visualization diagram to open up the world in the sea of consciousness; he studies the breathing method of the spirit snake, striving to turn the snake into a dragon and live forever. Living in a border town, he originally wanted to escape the world and seek immortality. But the dynasty collapsed, the government was in chaos, and injustices were everywhere. Li Fang had no choice but to step forward and step into the troubled times with his weak body. In this era of war and war, Li Fang rose up in the face of difficulties with his perseverance and extraordinary skills. He has gone through countless hardships, fought fierce battles with demons, and competed with heroes. As time goes by and things change, Li Fang always sticks to his original intention and finally creates his own glorious world, overlooking the vicissitudes of the world. ?
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Official(13)Scraped 6d ago
I didn't want to say it at first, but I really can't understand what you wrote.
There is too much nonsense, too many adjectives are used in the verbosity, there is not enough introduction, there are too many words, and the words are garbled and useless.
Seems very complicated
I can't understand, the eldest brother can't understand, and the second brother can't understand either.
A thirteen-year-old child is written as an adult. Is this harmonious? The plot is a bit incoherent and written in an inserted way.
After listening to more than ten chapters, the water is so powerful.
The theme idea is good and attractive, but the writing ability is not good enough. The plot is not very coherent. I always feel that it is going here and there, and the more I read, the more wrong it becomes. It is awkward. If it is not a computer or software article, I hope the author will continue to work hard, there is potential.
It looks uncomfortable and feels like it's overly pretentious!
There are too many things for a 13-year-old kid to write about. He is such a talented person. Wouldn't he write about his age? Show off
You should have used AI tools to make it incoherent. Let's write with AI.
come on
Look, this is a person's writing style. It's too repetitive and wordy.
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Community(0)
Official(13)Scraped 6d ago
I didn't want to say it at first, but I really can't understand what you wrote.
There is too much nonsense, too many adjectives are used in the verbosity, there is not enough introduction, there are too many words, and the words are garbled and useless.
Seems very complicated
I can't understand, the eldest brother can't understand, and the second brother can't understand either.
A thirteen-year-old child is written as an adult. Is this harmonious? The plot is a bit incoherent and written in an inserted way.
After listening to more than ten chapters, the water is so powerful.
The theme idea is good and attractive, but the writing ability is not good enough. The plot is not very coherent. I always feel that it is going here and there, and the more I read, the more wrong it becomes. It is awkward. If it is not a computer or software article, I hope the author will continue to work hard, there is potential.
It looks uncomfortable and feels like it's overly pretentious!
There are too many things for a 13-year-old kid to write about. He is such a talented person. Wouldn't he write about his age? Show off
You should have used AI tools to make it incoherent. Let's write with AI.
come on
Look, this is a person's writing style. It's too repetitive and wordy.
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