A Romantic Comedy with the Wrong Script
by Nice Pigeon
About This Novel
"Asama-kun, I like you, can you be with me?" The young and beautiful girl full of vigor falls in love for love. "I want to be with you too." Hideyuki Asama replied with a smile on his face. When the girl heard the words, the corners of her mouth couldn't stop rising, and she didn't stop until she reached the base of her ears. Her bright lips became terrifying, and you could clearly see the sharp and ferocious teeth inside, and there seemed to be sticky granules wriggling in the gaps... Hideyuki Asama's smile froze.
What Readers Think
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Official(16)Scraped 15d ago
Um
It's good to read. There's a bit of a scary scene at the beginning of the article, but most of it is about love. The protagonist is a good little scumbag, but he also vividly creates a unique image. After reading dozens of pictures, I can still see some elements of the invincible style. I think it's still pretty good-looking. . . . Big cheers for the author
come on
Is there a female protagonist? Single or multiple? No or yes I can do it
The title of the book does not match the content
At first glance, I thought it was a casual daily romance flow, but when I read it, it turned into an urban legend grinding system flow. The male protagonist's performance is mediocre, with no personality or characteristics. There is no sign of a female protagonist. I only treat my sister as a human being. The others are all NPC types. They have no feelings. They just increase their favorability and then decisively stop contacting her. It would be better to turn those tasks into dungeons. It's so boring. It feels like the world the protagonist lives in is like playing a browser game. Both the description concept and the outline framework are unsatisfactory. I hope the author can improve it.
Forced to retreat by comments
It's well written, but I was pushed back by the comments.
Haven't watched it yet, it should be fine. . . . .
Hope the content won't disappoint me. . . . . . . . Water water water water water water water water
hatchet
I always feel that the protagonist will be cut into pieces at the end of this book... Otherwise I'd be sorry for the protagonist's scum.
The male protagonist's body is not broken into several pieces.
What's the point of reading this book where the male protagonist won't be beaten by a hatchet?
It's not very pretty!
The plot is a bit too stiff and incoherent.
It's really not good at writing
In the ten chapters, the character design collapsed twice. You wanted to write about him having upright views, and you also wanted him to become stronger, and then he contradicted himself when he couldn't do something or did something wrong. It seemed very hypocritical and hypocritical. Look for yourself. There was a task to accept the love of a female ghost. You said that the protagonist didn't accept it because of the female ghost and didn't want to deceive the girl's feelings. Then so many girls appeared later and went on missions to deceive people's feelings. This protagonist I went straight there without hesitation. The character was ruined. Just flirt with me. It doesn't matter if you give me a good reason and refuse to accept it. It's very hypocritical for you to completely abdicate all the responsibilities and blame others for just a few random reasons. Then the data settings are outrageous. It is said that only an appearance of 8-9 points can trigger the mission, and then you can trigger several of them in this chapter and they are not the same. You are outrageous. Are 8-9 points all bad? If you write like this, it will be very difficult to reconcile later. From this, it can be seen that you can only read a few chapters of this book, but the rest will definitely be terrible.
Super typical scumbag, I can't stand it anymore
Withdraw, withdraw, this harem is opening up too fast, it's not that it doesn't look good, it's just that I can't accept it, ugh. . .
Rating
Community(0)
Official(16)Scraped 15d ago
Um
It's good to read. There's a bit of a scary scene at the beginning of the article, but most of it is about love. The protagonist is a good little scumbag, but he also vividly creates a unique image. After reading dozens of pictures, I can still see some elements of the invincible style. I think it's still pretty good-looking. . . . Big cheers for the author
come on
Is there a female protagonist? Single or multiple? No or yes I can do it
The title of the book does not match the content
At first glance, I thought it was a casual daily romance flow, but when I read it, it turned into an urban legend grinding system flow. The male protagonist's performance is mediocre, with no personality or characteristics. There is no sign of a female protagonist. I only treat my sister as a human being. The others are all NPC types. They have no feelings. They just increase their favorability and then decisively stop contacting her. It would be better to turn those tasks into dungeons. It's so boring. It feels like the world the protagonist lives in is like playing a browser game. Both the description concept and the outline framework are unsatisfactory. I hope the author can improve it.
Forced to retreat by comments
It's well written, but I was pushed back by the comments.
Haven't watched it yet, it should be fine. . . . .
Hope the content won't disappoint me. . . . . . . . Water water water water water water water water
hatchet
I always feel that the protagonist will be cut into pieces at the end of this book... Otherwise I'd be sorry for the protagonist's scum.
The male protagonist's body is not broken into several pieces.
What's the point of reading this book where the male protagonist won't be beaten by a hatchet?
It's not very pretty!
The plot is a bit too stiff and incoherent.
It's really not good at writing
In the ten chapters, the character design collapsed twice. You wanted to write about him having upright views, and you also wanted him to become stronger, and then he contradicted himself when he couldn't do something or did something wrong. It seemed very hypocritical and hypocritical. Look for yourself. There was a task to accept the love of a female ghost. You said that the protagonist didn't accept it because of the female ghost and didn't want to deceive the girl's feelings. Then so many girls appeared later and went on missions to deceive people's feelings. This protagonist I went straight there without hesitation. The character was ruined. Just flirt with me. It doesn't matter if you give me a good reason and refuse to accept it. It's very hypocritical for you to completely abdicate all the responsibilities and blame others for just a few random reasons. Then the data settings are outrageous. It is said that only an appearance of 8-9 points can trigger the mission, and then you can trigger several of them in this chapter and they are not the same. You are outrageous. Are 8-9 points all bad? If you write like this, it will be very difficult to reconcile later. From this, it can be seen that you can only read a few chapters of this book, but the rest will definitely be terrible.
Super typical scumbag, I can't stand it anymore
Withdraw, withdraw, this harem is opening up too fast, it's not that it doesn't look good, it's just that I can't accept it, ugh. . .
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