Fellow Taoist, Your Red Luan Star Has Moved

Fellow Taoist, Your Red Luan Star Has Moved

by Shiyuelx

Length:
664Kwords
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Ch. 294Final Words
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About This Novel

"Xiao Li, come with me, no one can stop me now!" "Zhao Li, come here! Come back to the sect with me to get married!" This is a story about a matchmaker \u002F Yue Lao (not) running wildly on the road of matchmaking (finding herself a wife).

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Official(9)Scraped 7d ago

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Do You Want Me to Guess? _eb43mo ago

The book should be good

But it's always so uncomfortable to watch, and I feel like the main character's crotch is stretched

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Self-discipline Makes Me Free41mo ago

It feels so messy!

I feel that the plot is a bit messy, and there is too little description about the protagonist, the environment and other aspects. It is basically all dialogue, and there is too much psychological description. The psychological description always appears suddenly and makes people confused about whose psychology it is.

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Tianjn33mo ago

The author writes about fish farming. Anyway, those who can read the last ten chapters are all good people.

TI
Tianjn33mo ago

It tells the story of the female protagonists coming back from the future to steal the male protagonist's opportunity and have sex with the male protagonist. It's rubbish and the chronological order is very messed up. I suggest you block this book.

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Yue Yue Zi45mo ago

Take a look... this is important to me

Please be sure to turn the last page when reading the book. I will take a look and read... Please

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YU
Yue Yue Zi45mo ago

explain a small problem

The story lines of the heroines before their rebirth are different, so let's talk about them here.

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Book Friends 2024021475926345mo ago

It's okay, but I always feel like I'm a little confused when I read it.

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YU
Yue Yue Zi44mo ago

Readers, stop keeping books

With this number of words, it is considered fat enough to be slaughtered and eaten. If I keep reading, without the support of further reading, I won't be able to get recommendations and may not even be listed on the shelves, and I will really be dying by then!

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Yue Yue Zi44mo ago

Regarding the previous issue of too many dialogues, let me talk about it here (struggle).

I really didn't pay attention to this issue before. From a certain perspective (myself), this writing method is very convenient. It can not only promote the plot but also better shape the characters (water word count). But many people have said that this issue affects the perception. I will use it as little as possible and try to exercise restraint in the future. Please bear with me in the previous chapters.

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