
Fellow Taoist, Your Red Luan Star Has Moved
by Shiyuelx
About This Novel
"Xiao Li, come with me, no one can stop me now!" "Zhao Li, come here! Come back to the sect with me to get married!" This is a story about a matchmaker \u002F Yue Lao (not) running wildly on the road of matchmaking (finding herself a wife).
What Readers Think
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Official(9)Scraped 7d ago
It feels so messy!
I feel that the plot is a bit messy, and there is too little description about the protagonist, the environment and other aspects. It is basically all dialogue, and there is too much psychological description. The psychological description always appears suddenly and makes people confused about whose psychology it is.
The author writes about fish farming. Anyway, those who can read the last ten chapters are all good people.
It tells the story of the female protagonists coming back from the future to steal the male protagonist's opportunity and have sex with the male protagonist. It's rubbish and the chronological order is very messed up. I suggest you block this book.
Take a look... this is important to me
Please be sure to turn the last page when reading the book. I will take a look and read... Please
explain a small problem
The story lines of the heroines before their rebirth are different, so let's talk about them here.
It's okay, but I always feel like I'm a little confused when I read it.
Readers, stop keeping books
With this number of words, it is considered fat enough to be slaughtered and eaten. If I keep reading, without the support of further reading, I won't be able to get recommendations and may not even be listed on the shelves, and I will really be dying by then!
Regarding the previous issue of too many dialogues, let me talk about it here (struggle).
I really didn't pay attention to this issue before. From a certain perspective (myself), this writing method is very convenient. It can not only promote the plot but also better shape the characters (water word count). But many people have said that this issue affects the perception. I will use it as little as possible and try to exercise restraint in the future. Please bear with me in the previous chapters.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(9)Scraped 7d ago
It feels so messy!
I feel that the plot is a bit messy, and there is too little description about the protagonist, the environment and other aspects. It is basically all dialogue, and there is too much psychological description. The psychological description always appears suddenly and makes people confused about whose psychology it is.
The author writes about fish farming. Anyway, those who can read the last ten chapters are all good people.
It tells the story of the female protagonists coming back from the future to steal the male protagonist's opportunity and have sex with the male protagonist. It's rubbish and the chronological order is very messed up. I suggest you block this book.
Take a look... this is important to me
Please be sure to turn the last page when reading the book. I will take a look and read... Please
explain a small problem
The story lines of the heroines before their rebirth are different, so let's talk about them here.
It's okay, but I always feel like I'm a little confused when I read it.
Readers, stop keeping books
With this number of words, it is considered fat enough to be slaughtered and eaten. If I keep reading, without the support of further reading, I won't be able to get recommendations and may not even be listed on the shelves, and I will really be dying by then!
Regarding the previous issue of too many dialogues, let me talk about it here (struggle).
I really didn't pay attention to this issue before. From a certain perspective (myself), this writing method is very convenient. It can not only promote the plot but also better shape the characters (water word count). But many people have said that this issue affects the perception. I will use it as little as possible and try to exercise restraint in the future. Please bear with me in the previous chapters.










