Travel Through Hundreds of Millions of Years and Come Out Again
About This Novel
Ye Qi traveled through time and worked hard for hundreds of millions of years (bushi) and finally became invincible. He has seen the collapse of eras and the rebirth of the world. He once tore up the way of heaven, and he also saved the people from water and fire. But this time, he just wanted to fish. Save the world or something, just do it when you have time. (Non-system flow, non-sign-in, invincible writing, no heroine, cultivation, salted fish)
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Official(3)Scraped 15d ago
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It's been more than ten days since I watched it. Let me write a review. Let's talk about the subject matter first. I can give 3 stars for the subject matter. There is nothing wrong with the time-traveling invincibility itself. The choice to abandon these elements of the system is also a bonus. However, it inevitably seems a bit old-fashioned, but this problem is not big. Speaking of writing style, I can only give this one 3 stars. The author's writing style can only be considered qualified, and there is still a gap between it and excellent online writers. The text descriptions in the book have the feeling of a running account, and there is no sense of substitution. Finally, the biggest problem I feel right now is the plot. The plot should only be given 2 stars. A total of 29 chapters gave me a personal feeling that it was chaotic. When it was introduced at the beginning, there were relatively few elements involved and there was no obvious feeling. Later, it started to become chaotic. The images change too frequently. In addition to the hasty switching of a scene within a few hundred words, the introduced world view is a bit empty, a bit big, and difficult for people to grasp, so I feel it is very messy. The article is quite messy, and I can't imagine a world in my mind. Without this kind of imagination, reading a novel would be as boring as reading a brief account of events. As for the improvement plan, if the author really wants to write well, it is best to prepare an outline, at least the outline of the first 100 chapters, and then improve the world view by himself. At least this way, there will be no self-interested writing, and to a large extent, the problem of chaos can be avoided. As for the writing style, it's better to refer to the novels of great masters. But I still give it five stars. Good luck to the author. Guess what this is for😑
So what, about the introduction?
Because my book was first published on Qidian, and I used the enter key to separate them because I was lazy. As a result, this morning I found that my book appeared on QQ Reading, and the introduction was stuck. The cooling-off period for changing the introduction last time has not yet expired, so I have to wait a few more days.
Leaves, leaves, leaves, leaves, leaves
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Community(0)
Official(3)Scraped 15d ago
personal evaluation
It's been more than ten days since I watched it. Let me write a review. Let's talk about the subject matter first. I can give 3 stars for the subject matter. There is nothing wrong with the time-traveling invincibility itself. The choice to abandon these elements of the system is also a bonus. However, it inevitably seems a bit old-fashioned, but this problem is not big. Speaking of writing style, I can only give this one 3 stars. The author's writing style can only be considered qualified, and there is still a gap between it and excellent online writers. The text descriptions in the book have the feeling of a running account, and there is no sense of substitution. Finally, the biggest problem I feel right now is the plot. The plot should only be given 2 stars. A total of 29 chapters gave me a personal feeling that it was chaotic. When it was introduced at the beginning, there were relatively few elements involved and there was no obvious feeling. Later, it started to become chaotic. The images change too frequently. In addition to the hasty switching of a scene within a few hundred words, the introduced world view is a bit empty, a bit big, and difficult for people to grasp, so I feel it is very messy. The article is quite messy, and I can't imagine a world in my mind. Without this kind of imagination, reading a novel would be as boring as reading a brief account of events. As for the improvement plan, if the author really wants to write well, it is best to prepare an outline, at least the outline of the first 100 chapters, and then improve the world view by himself. At least this way, there will be no self-interested writing, and to a large extent, the problem of chaos can be avoided. As for the writing style, it's better to refer to the novels of great masters. But I still give it five stars. Good luck to the author. Guess what this is for😑
So what, about the introduction?
Because my book was first published on Qidian, and I used the enter key to separate them because I was lazy. As a result, this morning I found that my book appeared on QQ Reading, and the introduction was stuck. The cooling-off period for changing the introduction last time has not yet expired, so I have to wait a few more days.
Leaves, leaves, leaves, leaves, leaves
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