After the Divorce, the Paranoid Gangster's Bai Yueguang Turned Dark

I want to say that I can give you a reward to encourage you. But your writing style is indeed immature. She and he are indistinguishable in the text. The opposites are written as opposites, and the dialogue between the male and female protagonists is very much like the dialogue between primary school students. I'm telling you what, don't think about it, do whatever he does... Although I don't deny that I was a little tempered today because of work matters before I reviewed this book. But I still think this book ranked 14th is very valuable. Finally, I want to say that if the author is a primary school student or a junior high school student, I think you should write articles about friendship rather than having no experience and immature thoughts; just write articles about bosses based on what others say or how they write. This is very inconsistent with your age, and there is no way to write an article that empathizes with you. A good article should make people feel the pain and anger of the heroine being abused; it should not make the reader feel embarrassed all the time, or even want to "swear". I don't mean to let you deny yourself. You are already very good at publishing it. I hope you won't be depressed! Finally, the dark history of the post-00s generation is all in high definition. Maybe I think what you wrote is reasonable now, but when I grow up and see it, I already want to go back to the past and modify history. I suggest you write some plots that are consistent with life, or just write about family and friendship. Keep up the good work~