Genshin Impact, but the Real World

The people of Haiji Island have never believed in the God of Thunder. It can be said that they hate the God of Thunder. But the leader, Coral Palace Xinhai, knew that the Thunder God would not take action, or she was betting that Coral Palace Xinhai would not lose the war without the participation of the Thunder God. Even if the Thunder God personally promulgated this decree, unless she aimed the knife at her people, no Joining the Resistance Army becomes like a living dead. It is possible to live a good life after joining the Resistance Army. Except for the locals, all those who join the Resistance Army have the eyes of God. People with the eyes of God think differently from ordinary people. The God of Thunder did not promulgate it himself but also signed the decree. The social practice does not collude with other beliefs.

There are too many psychological descriptions and descriptions of the protagonist's position. The biggest problem is that the protagonist can be useless, but you need him to have a sense of urgency to become stronger. So before it was released, I could only see the protagonist running around being pushed around, or humbly praying for cooperation, or the author's mentality has not changed. From a God's perspective, we can know that the protagonist will always rise, but the protagonist himself does not have any active behavior. If the cooperation in the article can be called active. When someone threatens you, you should start preparing your own weapons. Instead of being shy and pursuing cooperation to see how others look, you should have both. Having your own confidence is the most important thing.

The first few chapters of the author feel like a newcomer is not good at writing, but the subsequent plot of playing tricks is really smooth and attractive. The author's description of the development of the plot and the changes brought about by the protagonist amazes me. If you use the flow of agents to participate in the story and make reasonable interference, I believe this book will have a place in the fandom. I hope the author will not give up. Genshin Impact fandom is still relatively niche, and there are too few good books. Come on, author.

I originally wrote a long paragraph, but I deleted it because it seemed like I wanted to vent my emotions. I'll just talk about the problem. As a novel, there are very few descriptions of various characters and environments. 80% Of the whole text is analyzing various things, especially Mond, where one analysis is repeated three or four times. The protagonist analyzes it before he speaks, the protagonist says it again, and mentions it again in the second chapter. At first I felt that the author was very intelligent and the book was pretty good. But the more I read, the more I felt tired and irritable. It no longer felt like reading a novel. It's not that this is bad, but it's too much. There are too few intelligent novels nowadays and they are all just routines. The author's writing is actually pretty good, but I don't know if it's a matter of personal style or something. The writing is too analytical and ignores other aspects of the novel.

After leaving Dao Wife, writing was too complicated. There was no need to write down everyone's thoughts. Even if they were written down, there was no need to hold on to them.

The worldview of Genshin Impact is still a long way from the end, such as why the Queen, who has not yet appeared, and Kanreia, who has not yet learned the truth, became the Kong brother of the Teyvat people. These pitfalls can only be seen when the plot appears in the future, but now it is version 3.6, And there seems to be 3.7. It will take a year or two until the pitfalls are filled, and it is really unbearable. It's not that I can't continue to make things up. For example, I can take out the Book of Flowers and the Book of the Desert and continue writing. If that doesn't work, I can go back and celebrate a festival. In this way, I can still reach 3.7, And maybe I can get another wave of life. Strictly speaking, this is the happiest period since I wrote a novel. In fact, I am quite reluctant to part with everyone's subscription money. After all, I have to rely on this to make a living... But it's really not necessary. At this point in the story, my ability has already reached the top. In fact, I could have reached the top at one million words. It's just that Apep appeared at that time, so I could hold on a little longer. The writing of this book is not considered a stumbling block, because there is a general plot to rely on, and it is relatively easy to write. At one point, I wanted to get the 30-day update badge, but after persisting for almost 20 days, I was defeated by the epidemic, and then I never recovered... Tsk, you are not determined. The signing and listing were a bit strange, because the data at that time was average, and I was very happy to be signed. The listing was a bit shabby, but I also think the subsequent results were very good. After all, these were the months when I got the most money for writing. Just okay. I feel deeply ashamed for the rushed ending, and I feel sorry for everyone's subscription money, but my ability is limited and there are too many pitfalls, so I really can't write a better ending. Above, I just wrote my final remarks after two days of rest. As a result, the system prompts that it cannot be published, so please say goodbye in the comment area! Goodbye, book friends!

The writing and logic are very smooth, the foreshadowing is in place, and the description of the characters' psychology and language are perfect. However, for a fanfic, and a game fanfic that is more entertainment-oriented, it lacks the entertainment that it should have. In fact, this effort should be written out of the game and written as a strategy novel that has nothing to do with the game fanfic; secondly, the opening The protagonist's desire for power has always been emphasized in the foreshadowing, but so far there has not been much improvement in power. Therefore, I have always believed that this book should cut off the influence of extraordinary power and only use the core elements to write a strategy novel. Finally, I have to mention the author's foreshadowing ability. It is a pity that it was wasted on a fan novel that is biased toward light entertainment. This is my first time writing a long review, I hope you can bear with me😯 I won't rate it

The beginning is amazing, it doesn't feel like a novice novel at all, and the rest of it is pretty good too. But every country felt rushed, there was no climax, and overall it was very bland, and many plots that could be explored were not written (and couldn't be written, the protagonist is not the kind of person who would get involved in events that are not good for him), so the plot went by very quickly. Most of the time it is the personal opinion of the author (protagonist). When you actually simplify it, you will find that there is really very little plot, and there are a lot of inner activities. Moreover, writing it once is not enough and you have to write it over and over again. The protagonist cannot survive without a system. With a system, the starting point is too high, and it is too fast to directly upgrade the gods. As a result, most of the plot treasures in Genshin Impact are useless to pig's feet. The protagonist says that the most unpleasant thing is that profit comes first, so the entire novel is aimed at improving the strength of the gods.

Zhongli can rub mola with his hands, but it is impossible for the mola system to collapse. And the Gold House is just a Mora venue. If the author does not play Genshin Impact, I suggest the author to check more information, otherwise you will be criticized by many people.

The problem with Weiyi is that he likes to write his own opinions repeatedly, which is a bit watery and not worthy of the points he needs to pay for. But overall it's good. 👍