I Was Cheated by My 24-filial Boyfriend
by Cai Xiaokeng
About This Novel
Wen Xiaoqing is the gold medal seller and author of a holographic game called "24 Good Boyfriends". The scripts she wrote have vivid plots and are deeply loved by girls. Due to unknown reasons, the male protagonist's character in the script collapsed, the female protagonist awakened, and they teamed up to torture customers. The customer experience was extremely poor, resulting in constant negative reviews in the store. She could only enter the script world and rewrite the script so that the female protagonist could live a good life. After completing the task, return to reality. Wen Xiaoqing was trapped in the arms of a man, "Mrs. Lu, you can't escape."
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When I first saw the introduction to this book, I really liked it. I read a lot of quick travel articles, many of which were about the female protagonist trying to conquer the male protagonist. I thought this book was about the male protagonist trying to conquer the female protagonist, which is what I thought. But when I clicked on the book and read it, I found that it was not like that, emmm... And I didn't see where the counter-strategy was, not even the strategy. Secondly, there are many typos when reading, either typos or missing words. What's more, some sentences cannot be read clearly, which brings a very bad viewing experience. Again, the character of the heroine is really a bit speechless. She went to the script world she wrote to fix bugs. People came to kill you, but she still thought that she was their biological mother. I was really speechless about this. I have already entered the script world, so I am a character in the script. I don't know the characters in the script in the outside world, so I am really speechless =_=. Then, why are some names of people in the first world marked with *? I thought it was some bad word. When typed, an asterisk appears, which seems very strange. Since the author puts an asterisk to prove that this character will not appear, then, the author, you can just not mention it. This makes the reader very strange, and the perception is not very good. Sometimes the names of people are incomprehensible, and sometimes it feels like the person appears inexplicably. Finally, some of the content in the brackets written by the author can be written directly without brackets. It can be used as a supplement to the characters. But there are some contents that I feel are not necessary to write. For example, in the first script world, which character appears in Wen Hua, there is a bracket after it. I think it is not necessary. The author can directly add it at the end. If the brackets are added, it will have the feeling of a comic game. The above are my opinions and suggestions. It's not easy to code. Five stars.
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The writing is not good, and the character design is not very likable, especially the heroine, whose psychological activities are too boring! It's like a primary school student, and the male protagonist's inexplicable affection for the female protagonist is very speechless =_=. I don't rate books because I won't rate books I don't like, lest the internet sages criticize me.
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It started out well, but then it was disappointing
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Official(9)Scraped 12d ago
Tell the truth (don't be rude, it's my personal opinion)
When I first saw the introduction to this book, I really liked it. I read a lot of quick travel articles, many of which were about the female protagonist trying to conquer the male protagonist. I thought this book was about the male protagonist trying to conquer the female protagonist, which is what I thought. But when I clicked on the book and read it, I found that it was not like that, emmm... And I didn't see where the counter-strategy was, not even the strategy. Secondly, there are many typos when reading, either typos or missing words. What's more, some sentences cannot be read clearly, which brings a very bad viewing experience. Again, the character of the heroine is really a bit speechless. She went to the script world she wrote to fix bugs. People came to kill you, but she still thought that she was their biological mother. I was really speechless about this. I have already entered the script world, so I am a character in the script. I don't know the characters in the script in the outside world, so I am really speechless =_=. Then, why are some names of people in the first world marked with *? I thought it was some bad word. When typed, an asterisk appears, which seems very strange. Since the author puts an asterisk to prove that this character will not appear, then, the author, you can just not mention it. This makes the reader very strange, and the perception is not very good. Sometimes the names of people are incomprehensible, and sometimes it feels like the person appears inexplicably. Finally, some of the content in the brackets written by the author can be written directly without brackets. It can be used as a supplement to the characters. But there are some contents that I feel are not necessary to write. For example, in the first script world, which character appears in Wen Hua, there is a bracket after it. I think it is not necessary. The author can directly add it at the end. If the brackets are added, it will have the feeling of a comic game. The above are my opinions and suggestions. It's not easy to code. Five stars.
Come on, come on, come on, call yourself
Wen Xiaoqing rushes to the duck! ! ! Lu Xinian rushes to the duck! ! ! You must write your new book well, keep your original intention, and keep working hard
Check in
What kind of fairy book is this? 👍Beautiful!
Don't argue, the argument is yours.
The writing is not good, and the character design is not very likable, especially the heroine, whose psychological activities are too boring! It's like a primary school student, and the male protagonist's inexplicable affection for the female protagonist is very speechless =_=. I don't rate books because I won't rate books I don't like, lest the internet sages criticize me.
hehe
It started out well, but then it was disappointing
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Check in Check in Today is another day to check in first hhh(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
Check in
Punch in, punch in, punch in first place (￣y▽￣)~* Cover your mouth and snicker
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Check in Check in and check in first place today | ᴥ•́ )✧
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