
About This Novel
A boy traveled through the world of the Legend of the Dragon King, but the sentence "satisfy you" became a puzzling question. Why did a fictional world come? What is my mysterious body? I will find the answer through the clouds.
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Official(11)Scraped 6d ago
Hot chicken in the garbage
Author, please divide it into more paragraphs when writing, otherwise your eyes will hurt. The last and most important point is the single heroine Gu Yuena.
Come on, come on. By the way, can the author make the plot of Dou San more cruel and then start a Dou Four fanfic just like the original work? There are too few Dou fanfics that use Dou 3 as a foreshadowing. Please, please, please grant Pink a small wish 😊😊😊
The word "water" doesn't have to be too watery, right? It's a bit confusing.
Dear author, can we add another heroine?
I hope it's a single heroine, Gu Yuena, and she doesn't want a harem
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Can you divide it into more sections? It's so uncomfortable to watch like this.
Will Gu Yue and Na'er merge? Please reply
There is no need to describe the battle scene but it should be divided into several paragraphs (the writing is good)
The author divides more than one or two sentences into paragraphs, and even when the characters speak, he divides his words into paragraphs. It makes my eyes dazzled.
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Community(0)
Official(11)Scraped 6d ago
Hot chicken in the garbage
Author, please divide it into more paragraphs when writing, otherwise your eyes will hurt. The last and most important point is the single heroine Gu Yuena.
Come on, come on. By the way, can the author make the plot of Dou San more cruel and then start a Dou Four fanfic just like the original work? There are too few Dou fanfics that use Dou 3 as a foreshadowing. Please, please, please grant Pink a small wish 😊😊😊
The word "water" doesn't have to be too watery, right? It's a bit confusing.
Dear author, can we add another heroine?
I hope it's a single heroine, Gu Yuena, and she doesn't want a harem
Find segmentation
Can you divide it into more sections? It's so uncomfortable to watch like this.
Will Gu Yue and Na'er merge? Please reply
There is no need to describe the battle scene but it should be divided into several paragraphs (the writing is good)
The author divides more than one or two sentences into paragraphs, and even when the characters speak, he divides his words into paragraphs. It makes my eyes dazzled.









