There is a Sword in My Body

After reading the first chapter, I felt that there was too much nonsense, so I could shorten the dialogue. This is not writing a novel. I would like to briefly introduce the background of the novel, and then go directly to the main plot or branch plot. It is best for beginners to write exciting articles. Interesting articles do not need to consider too many details, and they are friendly to novice authors. If you are not capable, don't write about the big background. Start with the small background, and then expand to the big background if you write it well. Otherwise, it will collapse if you don't control it well.

There is a god-killing sword in my body, come on, kill the god

It feels like the author is writing an essay, with a lot of adjectives. In fact, there is no need to write these. Writing too much will only make people feel watery. Be concise and present what you want to write simply and straightforwardly. For example, the author has written a lot of detailed dialogues between the protagonist and the sword, explaining the background and fate. But what we want to see is not these things, but your story. You can shorten that long paragraph into one page, and then directly start talking about what the protagonist should do next.

The author's first version of the beginning, which I saved. Which version do you like?

It is my first time to write a book. From the time I published it until now, I have been feeling uneasy, anxious and hesitant. I am afraid that if I write poorly, I will waste everyone's time. This book is not pretentious, it just wants to tell a story. In life, one must persevere, persevere, love sincerely, and establish a heart for the world. Although there are thousands of people, I will go... The true character of a heroic man

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