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When he was just born, he was picked up and brought home by Qian Renxue, who had just awakened his martial spirit. He awakened the system and became Bibi Dong's disciple. Later, after training in the Killing City, he met Na'er. Just when Ling Qi overthrew the rule of the God Realm, the system suddenly said: "Do you want a reincarnation?"
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Some suggestions for authors
① (This is also an important point) Segmentation! ! ! ② Regarding the heroine, Gu Yuena and Qian Renxue, just these two, don't add any more ③If you, the author, really can't think of what to write, you can try to explain it. ④Torture Tang San to one (100 million) points of misery ⑤Update faster. I know your situation as the author. I'll update two to four times a week. Isn't it a problem? No, that's all for now
Author Brother Author Brother, can I give you two suggestions? I hope you can read it. We are not all children anymore. The other Douluo fans we read are really disgusting. Can the author not give Xiao Wu, Hu Liena, Bibi Dong, Tang San, Yu Xiaogang What a good ending for these people. I felt very angry after watching the first part of Douluo Continent. The more I thought about it, the more angry I became. Thinking of Gu Yuena and the others, they wanted to kill Tang San (Douluo Continent Xiaowu, a hundred thousand year rogue rabbit went to the human world for revenge, but as soon as he arrived at the academy, he accepted his younger brother to fall in love with Tang San, and even went to the Wuhun Hall to compete. I want to go Now that he has been caught, he still says that he has to face it calmly. I really don't understand. Is it true that Douluo has lost his mind? He won't be able to be a mother or a daughter in the future. The Soul Beast clan is also a traitor. I hope the author doesn't give him a good ending. Isn't he a rogue rabbit? Just throw him into the killing city and kill him. What the hell is that? Tang Sanyu, Xiaogang, I won't go on to say that what the two of them did is really unacceptable. I really don't want to say that these two sanctimonious hypocrites and idiots (Hu Liena, an orphan since she was a child, has good talent, and was raised by Jugui Douluo from childhood, In the end, Hu Liena was so blind that she directly sold three hundred thousand year soul rings from Wuhun Palace. Not to mention, revealing this incident directly killed Ghost Douluo, who had brought him up since childhood. Who is this person? Damn it, does he have a conscience? (Bibi Dong, I just want to ask, why did Qianxunji move a sand devil like him to fall in love with a trash from the hostile forces of Wuhun Palace without considering the consequences? Although Qianxun Bureau did that, it was very disgraceful, but Bibi Dong leaked the core secrets of Wuhun Palace, the two hundred thousand year soul beast Poseidon Island, otherwise you think the trash and Xiaogang How do you know, if it is other nobles, and the big family is directly reduced to a reproductive tool, what is Bibi Dong thinking later? Later, he also wants to fly away with Yu Xiaogang, and he will die like this in the end. I really don't know what his face and head are thinking. Wuhun Temple raised him from an orphan, does he really have no conscience?) (Between Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue, don't try to ease the relationship. Bibi Dong is not worthy of him, and will make him regret that he was born without nourishment. Let Qian Renxue cut off his arm directly. You can look for the arm later. Find the soul bone of the Blue Silver Emperor, restore the arm, and make Bibi Dong regret it all the time.) The rest is like this. I hope the author can think about it carefully. The author recommends a single female protagonist. It is better to write a single female protagonist in the later stage. If you want two female protagonists, I suggest Gu Yuena, Qian Renxue, and Ye Lingleng. Also, if there is a girl like Huo Wu, and Meng Yiran is like his grandparents, they will scare people when they hear the identity of the other party. Don't be used to it. Why just beat him up? Damn it, life is so short, why should I let you and someone as competitive as Huo Wu give him face, right? She's the kind of annoying woman who keeps pushing me. That's it. I hope the author can read it. Thank you to the author for reading it. Thank you.
This idea is not bad. It's hard to find a good Douluo fanfic. I hope the author will write it down well.
Sharingan, Sharingan again
Sharingan, it's Sharingan again, there are so many others in our country that don't write, it's always Sharingan
Author, if you really can't do it, please open a membership. I believe others will support you.
Please update the author quickly! I want to see the protagonist torture Tang San! Update soon! Update soon!
Are you alive? Wow wow wow wow wow wow.
Come on! Where did you go and where did I see?
Something about the author not writing novels in sections.
Author, I just want to ask you to break it down into sections. It's so tiring to read.
I'm doing this with a single female protagonist, I hope it's Gu Yuena, the single female protagonist, and then Xiao Wu, the traitor of the soul-tormenting beast clan
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Official(20)Scraped 22d ago
Some suggestions for authors
① (This is also an important point) Segmentation! ! ! ② Regarding the heroine, Gu Yuena and Qian Renxue, just these two, don't add any more ③If you, the author, really can't think of what to write, you can try to explain it. ④Torture Tang San to one (100 million) points of misery ⑤Update faster. I know your situation as the author. I'll update two to four times a week. Isn't it a problem? No, that's all for now
Author Brother Author Brother, can I give you two suggestions? I hope you can read it. We are not all children anymore. The other Douluo fans we read are really disgusting. Can the author not give Xiao Wu, Hu Liena, Bibi Dong, Tang San, Yu Xiaogang What a good ending for these people. I felt very angry after watching the first part of Douluo Continent. The more I thought about it, the more angry I became. Thinking of Gu Yuena and the others, they wanted to kill Tang San (Douluo Continent Xiaowu, a hundred thousand year rogue rabbit went to the human world for revenge, but as soon as he arrived at the academy, he accepted his younger brother to fall in love with Tang San, and even went to the Wuhun Hall to compete. I want to go Now that he has been caught, he still says that he has to face it calmly. I really don't understand. Is it true that Douluo has lost his mind? He won't be able to be a mother or a daughter in the future. The Soul Beast clan is also a traitor. I hope the author doesn't give him a good ending. Isn't he a rogue rabbit? Just throw him into the killing city and kill him. What the hell is that? Tang Sanyu, Xiaogang, I won't go on to say that what the two of them did is really unacceptable. I really don't want to say that these two sanctimonious hypocrites and idiots (Hu Liena, an orphan since she was a child, has good talent, and was raised by Jugui Douluo from childhood, In the end, Hu Liena was so blind that she directly sold three hundred thousand year soul rings from Wuhun Palace. Not to mention, revealing this incident directly killed Ghost Douluo, who had brought him up since childhood. Who is this person? Damn it, does he have a conscience? (Bibi Dong, I just want to ask, why did Qianxunji move a sand devil like him to fall in love with a trash from the hostile forces of Wuhun Palace without considering the consequences? Although Qianxun Bureau did that, it was very disgraceful, but Bibi Dong leaked the core secrets of Wuhun Palace, the two hundred thousand year soul beast Poseidon Island, otherwise you think the trash and Xiaogang How do you know, if it is other nobles, and the big family is directly reduced to a reproductive tool, what is Bibi Dong thinking later? Later, he also wants to fly away with Yu Xiaogang, and he will die like this in the end. I really don't know what his face and head are thinking. Wuhun Temple raised him from an orphan, does he really have no conscience?) (Between Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue, don't try to ease the relationship. Bibi Dong is not worthy of him, and will make him regret that he was born without nourishment. Let Qian Renxue cut off his arm directly. You can look for the arm later. Find the soul bone of the Blue Silver Emperor, restore the arm, and make Bibi Dong regret it all the time.) The rest is like this. I hope the author can think about it carefully. The author recommends a single female protagonist. It is better to write a single female protagonist in the later stage. If you want two female protagonists, I suggest Gu Yuena, Qian Renxue, and Ye Lingleng. Also, if there is a girl like Huo Wu, and Meng Yiran is like his grandparents, they will scare people when they hear the identity of the other party. Don't be used to it. Why just beat him up? Damn it, life is so short, why should I let you and someone as competitive as Huo Wu give him face, right? She's the kind of annoying woman who keeps pushing me. That's it. I hope the author can read it. Thank you to the author for reading it. Thank you.
This idea is not bad. It's hard to find a good Douluo fanfic. I hope the author will write it down well.
Sharingan, Sharingan again
Sharingan, it's Sharingan again, there are so many others in our country that don't write, it's always Sharingan
Author, if you really can't do it, please open a membership. I believe others will support you.
Please update the author quickly! I want to see the protagonist torture Tang San! Update soon! Update soon!
Are you alive? Wow wow wow wow wow wow.
Come on! Where did you go and where did I see?
Something about the author not writing novels in sections.
Author, I just want to ask you to break it down into sections. It's so tiring to read.
I'm doing this with a single female protagonist, I hope it's Gu Yuena, the single female protagonist, and then Xiao Wu, the traitor of the soul-tormenting beast clan









