
My System Can Buy One Get One Free
About This Novel
Boss, do you want to buy something? Buy a lighter and give you 100 million as a gift! Large size gift system, buy a skirt and give a beautiful woman, buy a key and give a sports car!
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Official(10)Scraped 9d ago
Junk article
It's really rubbish. The author didn't graduate from elementary school. What did he write about?
What a fucking rubbish, what the hell did you write?
It's okay if you don't connect the beginning and the end. The content written is incomprehensible.
Why is the writing so messy? . Does it really take 7 months to shoot a movie? So what's the deal with buy one get one free every day? Don't tell me there's nothing. It is also written one piece on the left and one piece on the right. .
Both the beginning and the end are cut off from chapter to chapter.
I don't have any suggestions. Just try your best. After all, I don't know how to write books. I only know how to read books. The plot is a bit confusing and the pretense is a bit too much. Mainly because the supporting characters are a bit too brainless.
Brainless article
How can there be so many brainless second-generation people in real life? The blind YY makes people feel a little nauseous.
I gave you 4 stars because you wrote about Angela Chang and helped her solve the problem. But the ending of your novel is not up to scratch. It's better to practice your writing!
What idiot wrote so poorly?
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What rubbish is written, I don't even know what I'm talking about
What is this?
What is this written about? A messy preface with no follow-up, and a few words to persuade you to quit.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(10)Scraped 9d ago
Junk article
It's really rubbish. The author didn't graduate from elementary school. What did he write about?
What a fucking rubbish, what the hell did you write?
It's okay if you don't connect the beginning and the end. The content written is incomprehensible.
Why is the writing so messy? . Does it really take 7 months to shoot a movie? So what's the deal with buy one get one free every day? Don't tell me there's nothing. It is also written one piece on the left and one piece on the right. .
Both the beginning and the end are cut off from chapter to chapter.
I don't have any suggestions. Just try your best. After all, I don't know how to write books. I only know how to read books. The plot is a bit confusing and the pretense is a bit too much. Mainly because the supporting characters are a bit too brainless.
Brainless article
How can there be so many brainless second-generation people in real life? The blind YY makes people feel a little nauseous.
I gave you 4 stars because you wrote about Angela Chang and helped her solve the problem. But the ending of your novel is not up to scratch. It's better to practice your writing!
What idiot wrote so poorly?
...............
What rubbish is written, I don't even know what I'm talking about
What is this?
What is this written about? A messy preface with no follow-up, and a few words to persuade you to quit.










