Super Divine Beast Master!

Super Divine Beast Master!

by Fat Tiger Of Destiny

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150Kwords73chapters
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About This Novel

Qin Hao traveled to a beast-controlling world with countless evil gods, desolate beasts, and aliens peeping at him. Talent, qualifications, and beast control are all indispensable. Demon species, true dragon species, giant dragon species, mechanical species... Countless types of beasts appear here. Each beast is unique and has infinite possibilities for evolution. This is the story of a young man who rises from humble beginnings and reaches the top step by step, overlooking all living beings.

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Dirty Moon21mo ago

I can read it, but the writing is too verbose

I have to repeat various words many times. I don't know if it's because of the low word count or something. I like to introduce some insignificant things in detail, but they are actually not important. If it doesn't help advance the plot, don't write it. Just bring the supporting characters through. Unless you want to write a group portrait, otherwise Control the proportion of the plot well. It is best if the plot of the supporting characters does not exceed 10%. Otherwise, it will appear that the protagonist's role is not as important as that of the supporting characters. In terms of the growth of pet beasts, just mention the mess of pharmaceuticals and supplements in one sentence, and just give the growth information directly. There is no need to write so much. Detailed, no one cares about that. If you can't write about combat, then just mention the combat power. Don't stress the combat power. Just skip the fight. One strength will reduce the strength by ten, and three moves will kill you in seconds. The combat power increases too slowly, and there are too many messy settings. You may have forgotten what settings you have. Don't have the bad habit of digging holes at the beginning. If you dig holes in the middle, there won't be many people in front of you. If you do so many tricks, everyone will stop reading your unclear writing. No matter how good you are in filling holes in the later stage, what's the use? People have already run away, and the book is dead. There is no later stage at all.

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