Siheyuan: the Eldest Son of the Yan Family
by Yufei 18
About This Novel
Yan Jiecheng, the 16-year-old eldest son of the Yan family, returned to the West in anger after graduating from junior high school and not being admitted to high school, let alone technical secondary school. In a car accident, Yang Yang, a veteran driver of the 21st century, inexplicably passed his soul into the body of Yan Jiecheng from the TV series "Love in the Courtyard" and started a different life.
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Official(14)Scraped 19d ago
Installing air conditioners in courtyards in the 1950s and 1960s was the protagonist
Don't care about everything, just put everything down lightly. Level 1 workers earn 33.5, Level 2 red workers earn 38.5, And your level 4 workers earn 42.5. Level 7 workers are paid more than 3 yuan more than level 9 engineers. If you don't know how to write, just read more information before writing.
No! The author needs to learn from this writing.
The writing is not coherent at all.
Nothing else can be seen from the first 30 chapters, except that the author does not have any relatives or elders over 50 years old. If there were, I wouldn't have written a plot where you could spend hundreds of dollars and a hundred pounds of white noodles at every turn, and give away all kinds of white noodles and steamed buns. So, author, if you really don't have any older relatives, don't you have a neighbor next door? If that doesn't work, stop an old man or lady on the roadside and ask them how long it took them to eat white noodles again when they were young, let alone how long it took them to eat noodles!
I didn't see you giving your family a toffee, either.
The Holy Mother is supported by plug-ins, and the plug-ins are too big!
I'm convinced, what is this thing about? Why do I feel that Yu Li's plot IQ is not enough?
The writing in other places is quite good. Why do you feel that your IQ is not good when you come to Yuli? You still become an announcer when you are illiterate, isn't it? Brother, are you kidding me? And in the original work, Yu Li seems to have graduated from junior high school, right? Or graduated from elementary school?
***, if you haven't read the original work, don't *** write it! ⁉Toys
This means that what you write at the beginning may become more and more broken later on.
At the beginning of this book, I read it one by one, then I skipped chapters, or even skipped dozens of pages at the end. I really can't figure it out. Since you married Yu Li, that's right. Then why is Yu Li portrayed as a person with no brains and no knowledge? Are people who have graduated from primary school illiterate? If he was really ignorant, then why did he choose to open a restaurant after the reform and opening up? However, he still understood. Every time I read a chapter written about Yu Li, I feel as if the protagonist has turned on the halo of wisdom and lost her brain. Starting from the chapter where the protagonist starts to lick Yu Li, it becomes more and more broken as it goes on. The writing feels like a dividing line. If you write that this child is missing, that child is missing, or was stolen or caught, I can understand it. After all, it was that era. But why does it feel like writing a halo of intelligence as soon as I write the chapter about Yu Li?
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Official(14)Scraped 19d ago
Installing air conditioners in courtyards in the 1950s and 1960s was the protagonist
Don't care about everything, just put everything down lightly. Level 1 workers earn 33.5, Level 2 red workers earn 38.5, And your level 4 workers earn 42.5. Level 7 workers are paid more than 3 yuan more than level 9 engineers. If you don't know how to write, just read more information before writing.
No! The author needs to learn from this writing.
The writing is not coherent at all.
Nothing else can be seen from the first 30 chapters, except that the author does not have any relatives or elders over 50 years old. If there were, I wouldn't have written a plot where you could spend hundreds of dollars and a hundred pounds of white noodles at every turn, and give away all kinds of white noodles and steamed buns. So, author, if you really don't have any older relatives, don't you have a neighbor next door? If that doesn't work, stop an old man or lady on the roadside and ask them how long it took them to eat white noodles again when they were young, let alone how long it took them to eat noodles!
I didn't see you giving your family a toffee, either.
The Holy Mother is supported by plug-ins, and the plug-ins are too big!
I'm convinced, what is this thing about? Why do I feel that Yu Li's plot IQ is not enough?
The writing in other places is quite good. Why do you feel that your IQ is not good when you come to Yuli? You still become an announcer when you are illiterate, isn't it? Brother, are you kidding me? And in the original work, Yu Li seems to have graduated from junior high school, right? Or graduated from elementary school?
***, if you haven't read the original work, don't *** write it! ⁉Toys
This means that what you write at the beginning may become more and more broken later on.
At the beginning of this book, I read it one by one, then I skipped chapters, or even skipped dozens of pages at the end. I really can't figure it out. Since you married Yu Li, that's right. Then why is Yu Li portrayed as a person with no brains and no knowledge? Are people who have graduated from primary school illiterate? If he was really ignorant, then why did he choose to open a restaurant after the reform and opening up? However, he still understood. Every time I read a chapter written about Yu Li, I feel as if the protagonist has turned on the halo of wisdom and lost her brain. Starting from the chapter where the protagonist starts to lick Yu Li, it becomes more and more broken as it goes on. The writing feels like a dividing line. If you write that this child is missing, that child is missing, or was stolen or caught, I can understand it. After all, it was that era. But why does it feel like writing a halo of intelligence as soon as I write the chapter about Yu Li?
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