Inherit a Mercenary Group at the Start
by This Guy Has Something To Say
About This Novel
Traveling through a parallel world, Lu Ting inherited a group that was on the verge of bankruptcy! I thought that in the mercenary profession, life was precarious every day, so it would be better to take this opportunity to close down the group under my name, then wash my hands in a golden basin, and completely withdraw from the vicious mercenary industry. But never thought that a golden finger named [The Strongest Mercenary System] suddenly appeared! As long as you gain enough reputation, you can purchase any military weapons and equipment in the [Strongest Mercenary System], ranging from pistol smoke grenades to aircraft carrier bombers. At the same time, if you complete relevant mercenary tasks in accordance with the system requirements, you can also receive very generous rewards! Since then, Lu Ting, who is responsible for the "Strongest Mercenary System", has led his group and embarked on a journey to subvert the entire mercenary industry!
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Official(89)Scraped 4d ago
I wrote nearly 40 chapters about a gun battle. Do you think you are good at writing? Why don't you also write down the movements of the gun barrel and the fireworks when the bullet comes out of the barrel? If you write more, write 800 chapters. If you don't pounce on it, who will?
It's so annoying. I was stuck in a hotel, and I couldn't get out of the water after several sheets of water. Wouldn't it be better to just find a window and jump out? A lot of confessions and self-pleasures repeated over and over again
It's too ink, and the supporting characters are not very smart. In the hotel, it looks like Calabash Boys saving a few grandpas from dying. Since the thing is very important, just send hundreds of people to surround the building to see if the pig's feet die. Unless pig feet can fly
In the beginning, a beautiful policewoman single-handedly infiltrated a drug trafficking organization with thousands of people to collect evidence. Later, she found the protagonist and a new mercenary kidnapped her morally and asked the protagonist to take on a task. Any task cost millions and tens of millions of dollars. Two grenades and a truck exploded in a two-kilometer range, one blowing up a large area. Seven people chased the tens of thousands of Myanmar armed forces to fight, and there was an employer worth one billion to find the seven protagonists to rescue people. One hundred and forty-fifty chapters were written for the two missions. I haven't seen so many chapters written for one mission in a long time.
You
It's so long-winded. I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 20. Is your knife-throwing skill just a decoration? You keep leaving it in the room to hit others. Besides, is the super serum so good?
It's so poorly written, too verbose, too trashy, too watery🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄
It was okay at first
Is this your first time writing a book? The plot is too delayed If you are a system writer, you should use the system more and use the system mall to emphasize its role. You are writing about a mercenary organization, not a lone mercenary, although your novel is still in the early stages. Personally, I still recommend that you end this plot as soon as possible. Even ordinary soldiers in our country can defeat Meng Jia's special forces. You, a Captain America, are physically fit and have the magic skill of throwing knives. If you are so cautious when beating a group of soldiers, doesn't this enhancer look like rubbish?
Are you saying it's not poisonous? Generally speaking, mercenaries only cost tens of thousands of dollars, but for the protagonist, he opened his mouth to millions and tens of millions of dollars, and there are a lot of loopholes. A beautiful Chinese detective single-handedly sneaked into a drug den with thousands of people, and also found a new mercenary. The truck explosion range was two kilometers, seven people attacked the tens of thousands of armed forces in northern Myanmar, and one billion to find seven people to rescue people. With this one billion, they can find a mercenary group with hundreds or thousands of people.
The author didn't think about it at all. English, French, American, Chinese. What about Russian special forces? Was it eaten by the author?
I wrote a task and there were almost forty pictures. Just look at it.
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Official(89)Scraped 4d ago
I wrote nearly 40 chapters about a gun battle. Do you think you are good at writing? Why don't you also write down the movements of the gun barrel and the fireworks when the bullet comes out of the barrel? If you write more, write 800 chapters. If you don't pounce on it, who will?
It's so annoying. I was stuck in a hotel, and I couldn't get out of the water after several sheets of water. Wouldn't it be better to just find a window and jump out? A lot of confessions and self-pleasures repeated over and over again
It's too ink, and the supporting characters are not very smart. In the hotel, it looks like Calabash Boys saving a few grandpas from dying. Since the thing is very important, just send hundreds of people to surround the building to see if the pig's feet die. Unless pig feet can fly
In the beginning, a beautiful policewoman single-handedly infiltrated a drug trafficking organization with thousands of people to collect evidence. Later, she found the protagonist and a new mercenary kidnapped her morally and asked the protagonist to take on a task. Any task cost millions and tens of millions of dollars. Two grenades and a truck exploded in a two-kilometer range, one blowing up a large area. Seven people chased the tens of thousands of Myanmar armed forces to fight, and there was an employer worth one billion to find the seven protagonists to rescue people. One hundred and forty-fifty chapters were written for the two missions. I haven't seen so many chapters written for one mission in a long time.
You
It's so long-winded. I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 20. Is your knife-throwing skill just a decoration? You keep leaving it in the room to hit others. Besides, is the super serum so good?
It's so poorly written, too verbose, too trashy, too watery🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄
It was okay at first
Is this your first time writing a book? The plot is too delayed If you are a system writer, you should use the system more and use the system mall to emphasize its role. You are writing about a mercenary organization, not a lone mercenary, although your novel is still in the early stages. Personally, I still recommend that you end this plot as soon as possible. Even ordinary soldiers in our country can defeat Meng Jia's special forces. You, a Captain America, are physically fit and have the magic skill of throwing knives. If you are so cautious when beating a group of soldiers, doesn't this enhancer look like rubbish?
Are you saying it's not poisonous? Generally speaking, mercenaries only cost tens of thousands of dollars, but for the protagonist, he opened his mouth to millions and tens of millions of dollars, and there are a lot of loopholes. A beautiful Chinese detective single-handedly sneaked into a drug den with thousands of people, and also found a new mercenary. The truck explosion range was two kilometers, seven people attacked the tens of thousands of armed forces in northern Myanmar, and one billion to find seven people to rescue people. With this one billion, they can find a mercenary group with hundreds or thousands of people.
The author didn't think about it at all. English, French, American, Chinese. What about Russian special forces? Was it eaten by the author?
I wrote a task and there were almost forty pictures. Just look at it.
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