The Charming Elder Sister Escorts Her Ruthlessly

The Charming Elder Sister Escorts Her Ruthlessly

by Gentle Iron-headed Baby

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48Kwords23chapters
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Ch. 23The Universe in the Hairpin
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As the senior sister of the Lingxiao Sect, Song Jinshu had neither talent nor luck, so she could only rely on hard work to get where she is today. However, in the fantasy world, she saw the junior sister she saved using the system, using herself as a stepping stone to take her place step by step. She was spurned by her fellow masters, and even her fiancé thought she was vicious and disgusting. In the end, she was expelled from the sect and died. Song Jinshu felt that it was baffling. She only wanted to become stronger. After coming out of the illusion, she changed to Wuqing Dao. However, she found that her junior fellow disciples, talented fellow Taoists, master and her fiancé all became strange. She could even hear her junior sister and the system discussing how to attack her? In order to become stronger, she would indeed go to any lengths, and the gentle and respectful senior sister Jian was all just an act. PS: A strong woman, a heartthrob, no domineering, (except in fantasy) no abuse of women. All members have bold single arrows for the heroine, and the heroine just wants to become stronger.

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The introduction and the title of the book are not too problematic in the first chapter, but the depiction of emotions is too hasty and there is no buffer time. Is the heartthrob born of desire, or is it? If the appreciation or love for the heroine is based solely on desire, I think being a heartthrob is not a good thing. When I saw that it was a heartthrob, I was quite looking forward to it. The heroine's strength or a certain shining point attracted some admirers, but after reading the first chapter, I became disappointed again. Could it be that just seeing the heroine makes me have desire, and then forcibly twisting the desire into love, it is a precise step on my emotional lightning point. It is really good to write about a heartthrob, but the heartthrob you wrote is too superficial, or is a heartthrob generated by desire a good thing for the heroine? A group of jackals, tigers and leopards stare closely at the heroine and want to possess her every day. Do you think this is a good thing? For a moment, these are my thoughts on the first chapter. It struck a chord with me. I haven't read the rest.

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