Douluo: Kill Tang Hao's Family at the Beginning
by Looking Up At The Dust Falling On The Ground
About This Novel
After traveling through Douluo, he became a member of the Qian family. He had no system, and he was not a direct descendant of the Qian family. Fortunately, there lived an old witch with a "beautiful person and a kind heart" in the chest pendant. When Qian Guangyu broke through to level ninety-five, Tang San had just been born, and Tang Hao could only reach level ninety. Faced with such a temptation of fate, how could he endure it?
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Official(27)Scraped 9d ago
It's not interesting. The protagonist is too useless. This book has already been pre-ordered.
I would like to give some advice to the author. You can make your own statistics. There are almost more than 10,000 Douluo fan fiction books on this novel website. But for the more popular ones, stick to these few points. Even if the writing is average, it won't be too bad. Here are the general directions: 1. It doesn't matter who you side with. It's okay to create your own forces, but you have to be firm in your stance. If you side with Shrek, go to the Spirit Hall. If you side with the Spirit Hall, go to Shrek. If you create your own forces, work hard to carve out your own world. 2. You must have a setting before writing. Why do so many people write books that are so popular? The setting must be perfect, the stance must be firm, and the writing must be enjoyable to the end. Either you can use tactics to overwhelm the opponent (this is the most difficult thing to do because you overwhelm the opponent if you forcibly outwit the opponent), or you must be weak and work hard to overwhelm the opponent. Repeating it will only make everyone bored. 3. It should be explained clearly before and after, what will the protagonist do? It is not required that the explanation be very clear, but it cannot be summed up in one stroke. If you find it difficult to explain anything that is unreasonable, you can leave it to the system. 3. No matter what genre you choose, you must have some fun in the book. It's important to have some fun. It's important to have some fun. 4 It can be watery but not too watery. Novels are as difficult to agree on as food. They can only develop in one direction, and it is impossible to cover everything and make everyone like it. But if you don't take a firm stance, everyone will say you are poisonous. Because your book is hated by everyone.
The protagonist is such a loser, the author is so vicious in his writing, he actually let Tang Hao go despite such a huge advantage, he wants to lick Tang San so much, why should he have feelings for Wuhun Palace? If you have feelings, you don't give the hundred thousand year soul beast to Wuhun Palace, you give it to Tang Hao, It's really poisonous. Even if Bibi Dong can't absorb it, Qian Renxue can do it. Wouldn't it be better to sacrifice it directly? With Tang Hao and Tang San in hand, how could there be any problem? I read the comments before and thought it was an exaggeration. I didn't expect it to say that I will never see you again.
What kind of stupid plot is this?
The protagonist wastes snacks and wastes air. . . . . . . . . . .
It's half past four. Author, this is the first time in my life that I have seen such a low score. I always thought they started at a minimum of six points. I didn't expect you to open my eyes.
Can't we kill Sendaoliu?
It's so damn vicious. You can still be such an idiot even though you know the plot. I can't imagine it.
There are too many poisonous points, and the protagonist also pulls his hips
He really wrote Douluo to be so high-level, but fate, fate is shit, Douluo, Douluo, and Heavenly Dao were all taken away by Tang Hao! Douluo has no destiny at all, otherwise the God of Destiny would have appeared in the God Realm long ago! And Tang San is not the Son of Destiny. You also said that Tang San is an alien soul brought back by God Shura. He is simply the son of pseudo-luck, unlike Huo Yuhao, the son of Dou Er's true destiny. The protagonist is written as so aggrieved and useless. Qian Qiya is a native Douluo character. What's the point of writing a fan? I can't stand the aggravation of reading a book!
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Official(27)Scraped 9d ago
It's not interesting. The protagonist is too useless. This book has already been pre-ordered.
I would like to give some advice to the author. You can make your own statistics. There are almost more than 10,000 Douluo fan fiction books on this novel website. But for the more popular ones, stick to these few points. Even if the writing is average, it won't be too bad. Here are the general directions: 1. It doesn't matter who you side with. It's okay to create your own forces, but you have to be firm in your stance. If you side with Shrek, go to the Spirit Hall. If you side with the Spirit Hall, go to Shrek. If you create your own forces, work hard to carve out your own world. 2. You must have a setting before writing. Why do so many people write books that are so popular? The setting must be perfect, the stance must be firm, and the writing must be enjoyable to the end. Either you can use tactics to overwhelm the opponent (this is the most difficult thing to do because you overwhelm the opponent if you forcibly outwit the opponent), or you must be weak and work hard to overwhelm the opponent. Repeating it will only make everyone bored. 3. It should be explained clearly before and after, what will the protagonist do? It is not required that the explanation be very clear, but it cannot be summed up in one stroke. If you find it difficult to explain anything that is unreasonable, you can leave it to the system. 3. No matter what genre you choose, you must have some fun in the book. It's important to have some fun. It's important to have some fun. 4 It can be watery but not too watery. Novels are as difficult to agree on as food. They can only develop in one direction, and it is impossible to cover everything and make everyone like it. But if you don't take a firm stance, everyone will say you are poisonous. Because your book is hated by everyone.
The protagonist is such a loser, the author is so vicious in his writing, he actually let Tang Hao go despite such a huge advantage, he wants to lick Tang San so much, why should he have feelings for Wuhun Palace? If you have feelings, you don't give the hundred thousand year soul beast to Wuhun Palace, you give it to Tang Hao, It's really poisonous. Even if Bibi Dong can't absorb it, Qian Renxue can do it. Wouldn't it be better to sacrifice it directly? With Tang Hao and Tang San in hand, how could there be any problem? I read the comments before and thought it was an exaggeration. I didn't expect it to say that I will never see you again.
What kind of stupid plot is this?
The protagonist wastes snacks and wastes air. . . . . . . . . . .
It's half past four. Author, this is the first time in my life that I have seen such a low score. I always thought they started at a minimum of six points. I didn't expect you to open my eyes.
Can't we kill Sendaoliu?
It's so damn vicious. You can still be such an idiot even though you know the plot. I can't imagine it.
There are too many poisonous points, and the protagonist also pulls his hips
He really wrote Douluo to be so high-level, but fate, fate is shit, Douluo, Douluo, and Heavenly Dao were all taken away by Tang Hao! Douluo has no destiny at all, otherwise the God of Destiny would have appeared in the God Realm long ago! And Tang San is not the Son of Destiny. You also said that Tang San is an alien soul brought back by God Shura. He is simply the son of pseudo-luck, unlike Huo Yuhao, the son of Dou Er's true destiny. The protagonist is written as so aggrieved and useless. Qian Qiya is a native Douluo character. What's the point of writing a fan? I can't stand the aggravation of reading a book!
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