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There are only three points to criticize Tang San: 1. Stealing Xuantian Kung; 2. Double standards; 3. Destroying the city of killing. First of all, the first point: I don't know the original story, but I remember that in the anime, there was an elder who allowed him to practice, but others didn't know, and others also forgave him later. Since the person involved didn't say anything, what can I say as an outsider? Second: Everyone has this to some extent, so there's no need to say more. Third: Destroy the Killing City. If it were me before, I might have said it was a bit excessive. But before I saw a character in a novel say something about being too murderous, and someone immediately retorted me and said: "The fantasy world is about strength. Who is telling you about benevolence, justice and morality, and who should blame them for being too weak?" Haha... So there is nothing to say. Originally, I read the tweet and thought it was very interesting, but when I saw someone saying that I wanted to take Yu Xiaogang as my teacher, I gave up on the spot. He is the most cowardly and shameless person in Douyi🤞

I have to emphasize here, because I don't want to write something that is too violent, and I always feel uncomfortable with this or that. Therefore, the protagonist gets along with the characters in the original work with a normal heart. He is really experiencing all kinds of things in this world, and will not deliberately target anyone. , And will not deliberately please anyone, let alone lick it. As for the female characters that I like, I will naturally go to guide them. After all, you can't really go to that station. Once you let go of your domineering spirit, others will follow you. Of course, if there are characters you hate or don't like, Then I can only say sorry. I can't satisfy everyone. Some people like Xiao Wu, some people like Zhu Zhuqing, and some people like Bibi Dong. If I write this, I am destined to offend that one, so I might as well do it according to what I like. In short, I have seen everyone's comments. , I am also very grateful that you can read my book. I am a newbie, and I am not yet able to wow people. Writing this fanfic can be regarded as a solution to some of the regrets of reading books when I was a child. That's all. Finally, I would like to thank my adoptive fathers for supporting me. Xiaopoujie's writing is not good, light comment~

There is nothing wrong with Dou Yi and Tang San, he was just born into the assassination sect, and he is also an ancient person, and his way of thinking is out of touch with the modern public. So it doesn't really matter to me if you write about nurturing the third person or the third person who tortures the third person. You don't have a reasonable explanation for losing Yu Xiaogang, how Tang San joined Shrek, and you can't think of how to write the subsequent changes in the plot. As a result, Tang San can only follow the original plot to apprentice with Yu Xiaogang, and use this as a perspective to carry out the original plot, while at the same time changing the plot slightly. Of course, this is just my guess. Only you know what you think specifically, but I have to say that it was a failure to let Tang San become a disciple of Yu Xiaogang.

In the latest chapter, I saw Tang San becoming a disciple of Yu Xiaogang and gave up. What I wrote before is not a big problem at all. Now that the protagonist is on good terms with Tang San, there is nothing to say about it. After all, I didn't feel there was much of a problem when Dou Yi was fighting. Tang San only started to lose character when he was fighting against 2. I have to worship Master B, right?

First of all, this outline is okay. Even if the plot and character settings are just a mess, don't feel bad about it, the author. Look at what you wrote. The protagonist is just a white guy who rushes off without a brain and tells Tang San about his twin martial arts souls. The protagonist stands there and watches as Tang San practices Xuantian Kung. He also wants Tang Hao to teach him the secret of blacksmithing. He is really not afraid of death. How did Tang San die in his previous life because he secretly learned Xuantian Kung? What kind of killer organization is Tang Sect? What does the author think of Tang San as a simple-minded technical geek? Why don't you give Tang San something to eat, and you want Tang San to treat the protagonist as his ancestor.

I actually don't have any objections to Tang San, mainly because I don't like anus.

The subject matter is okay, if you are interested, you can write it at the beginning, and it is okay to become friends with Tang San (since you were raised since childhood), but it is better to change it for Yu Xiaogang. Since you have become friends with Tang San, then don't become a disciple. In the original plot, Yu Xiaogang is of little use. If I want to go to Shrek according to the original plot, wouldn't it be better if the protagonist mentions it? Can the follow-up also develop according to the original work? Seeing the latest chapter 30, the plot of Yu Xiaogang is just a little bit, and it won't take too much time to change it. The author himself looked at the response from readers in the chapter about apprenticeship and knew that a lot of people were lost there.

It's no problem to become close friends with Tang San, but he didn't stop me from becoming a disciple.

It's a good thing that the author wants to write his own thoughts But the author, you have to consider how rampant it is to read so many pornographic articles on QQ. Some authors even openly write about the theme of sexual abuse, but there are still many people reading it, which shows that most people on this platform hate or even hate the character of Tang San. This situation means that the most popular theme is physical abuse. If the author does not abuse the third person, this first step will persuade many people away. Also, I don't know why the author combines violence and abuse of three. If the author doesn't know how to abuse three while making the whole novel not very violent, the author can look at other authors who also abuse three, but they do it in a tricky way.

The subject matter is quite good, and the third son's friends don't object to it, but the protagonist is also disgusting, so they don't stop him from becoming a disciple. After knowing each other for such a long time, Sanzi still didn't know anything, and the most basic soul master knowledge was not taught to him. If you were to write a story where the protagonist imparted knowledge to Tang San and then led Tang San to slap him in the face, so many people wouldn't give it a low rating.