Flowers Bloom and Fall over the Years

I was bored to the extreme and wanted to read some sweet articles about daily life. I accidentally saw this novel labeled "Daily Love". My curiosity made me click in, and my desire to survive made me quit. Because I have friends who are writing novels, I also have a superficial understanding of the theoretical knowledge of novels. The following remarks only represent my personal views. First of all, there is no subject matter concept. Putting subject matter first and then story is the main premise for writing novels. If you are telling about modern life, you must focus on the core of the story. I don't know what the core of this novel is to express. Sweet love? Youthful entanglements? It would be too shallow to write a novel purely for the sake of sweetness. Secondly, there are too many flat characters, which affects the perception. The so-called flat characters are to label the characters in the painting, while the round characters, in contrast, are shaped through multiple events. The characters that appear in this novel, with all due respect, are not even flat characters. Or maybe the author wants to challenge the group drama, but unfortunately his imagination cannot keep up with the writing. These characters have no merit except for the ignorance of youth. It is recommended that the author write a biography of his character before writing a novel. It does not need to involve the current story or dialogue. It only needs to describe his experience before the story happened. This can prevent the character from jumping out and avoid too many repetitions of the character. Finally, the plot is incomprehensible and lacks logic. Once again, ordinary writing is not equal to hydrology. The lack of attention-grabbing content means that the writing is not good, the conflict is not enough, and there is no new idea. The plot in the middle is as meaningless as a vulgar youth micro-movie, lacking dramatic conflict. Designs such as small reversals and baggage-shaking are also needed in daily life to arouse readers' emotions and shape the arc of the characters. Also, the title at the beginning is not the place for the author to write a lyrical poem! After reading this novel in a humanitarian spirit, I guess the author is probably around the second grade of junior high school, and the writing style of high school students should be more mature. Give Samsung a chance to encourage such a pure heart and the courage to put such works on the Internet platform. I hope that I will continue to have the courage to challenge myself, learn professional knowledge, and go further on the road of literature. Then the prodigal son returns.