City: Starting from Xiuxian Academy

How should I put it? There are too many words for water. When recruiting people in the early stage, it is enough to clearly show that you are an immortal cultivator and just show your magic. It has to be somewhere, the male protagonist: I can teach you how to become an immortal, the others: liars, magicians, blah blah blah.

I read dozens of chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. After all, there is a process for cultivating immortality when written by others, just like fighting monsters and leveling up. At least you can tell at a glance that you are cultivating immortality. I have read dozens of chapters of this thing and I still don't know what it is about. Also, the level of language organization is extremely poor. It feels like the author has not even graduated from high school, and other college entrance examination essays are better than this. To put it bluntly, if you can't write it, don't write it.

Also, how many heroines are there? (Are they both Nangong and Long Ling?)

This level is speechless. The language organization and expression skills are too poor. The content is not attractive at all and makes people feel mediocre. The more I read, the less I feel.

In Chapter 269, it was still Qingyun College, but in the next chapter it became Qingyun Sect. Didn't Mr. Nangong know Li Xuan before? I couldn't stand it anymore after more than 330 chapters. There was also the murder hall, which just disappeared. Nangong Yue also changed a lot after that. Didn't Li Xuan save his grandfather before? Why did it become the first time we met again? Maybe I didn't understand

I can't stand Chapter 26 anymore. I can fly with a sword. I have to rely on deception and celebrity promotion to recruit people.

What the hell, you have the nerve to ask for a membership, but the first impression at the beginning makes people unable to stand it.