Start as a Full-time Mage with the Heart of God
by Xiao Ming Almost Entered The Palace
About This Novel
I'm here to give you some last-ditch blows... No, I'm here to block the knives. There is a plot of Douluo II later, and I added it to the story from another novel I sent! La! ! La! ! ! Before 250, it was a full-time mage chapter. I ran away in the middle and will go back to fight the boss later. The last few dozen chapters of the 250th chapter are just a little bit of the author's selfishness. Try to write how to write the Immortal Cultivation style. You're a traveler anyway, so it's okay to run around, right?
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Official(34)Scraped 21d ago
Who is the heroine? Single or many? Is there Mu Ningxue?
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I don't want to read the first chapter. It's completely illogical. Let's not talk about the plot behind it. In the first chapter, it says that the younger brother who grew up with the protagonist in the orphanage died. **What the hell are you saying in someone's cemetery that General Raiden (a game character) will be handed over to you? It doesn't feel sad at all. If it's not to highlight this feeling, then why was this part of the plot written? Then suddenly he was willing to sacrifice his life in order to resurrect his younger brother. I was speechless. For me, illogical novels are not a selling point.
It's not interesting to read the comments. The single heroine, Ye Xinxia,,, the original version of Big Trouble is unbearable. There are so many goddesses Mu Nujiao, Astraea or others who insist on this Big Trouble🤐 Mu is similar.
Novels for intellectually retarded people are either on the way to subduing or reducing intelligence.
dull
It's very boring, basically just following the protagonist's plot with no highlights.
I didn't read much, and I couldn't understand it at the beginning. Why would I write a brother to death? There is no one else who has set up the Heart of God. It all follows the plot, nothing special, and it also suppresses cultivation. Can the earth element you wrote yourself increase 100 times by practicing on the earth veins and can it be done non-stop all day long? If your cultivation level doesn't increase in one year, you couldn't write it because you set it too high because you want to grow too fast, right?
I removed it. If you don't like others, I like Tang Yue.
There's nothing interesting about the single female protagonist. I don't want to see it.
How to put it, I will comment on two sentences, plus the previous two sentences, after I finish.
There is no need to write about it. Why the fuck did you become a baby when you traveled through the past? The *** is the third dimension. Did you physically travel to the second dimension? It was also picked up by the protagonist's family at the beginning. Does the protagonist's family have the money to raise another baby? The reason for adoption is because Mo Fan's father and Mo He Xinxia's mother are together, not because Mo Jiaxin is kind. He wants to be kind and has gone to the orphanage to adopt children. Why is the protagonist forced to adopt and not follow logic? A novel without its own logic can attract readers by fantasy.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(34)Scraped 21d ago
Who is the heroine? Single or many? Is there Mu Ningxue?
Free prostitution I'm waiting for membership to read for free
I don't want to read the first chapter. It's completely illogical. Let's not talk about the plot behind it. In the first chapter, it says that the younger brother who grew up with the protagonist in the orphanage died. **What the hell are you saying in someone's cemetery that General Raiden (a game character) will be handed over to you? It doesn't feel sad at all. If it's not to highlight this feeling, then why was this part of the plot written? Then suddenly he was willing to sacrifice his life in order to resurrect his younger brother. I was speechless. For me, illogical novels are not a selling point.
It's not interesting to read the comments. The single heroine, Ye Xinxia,,, the original version of Big Trouble is unbearable. There are so many goddesses Mu Nujiao, Astraea or others who insist on this Big Trouble🤐 Mu is similar.
Novels for intellectually retarded people are either on the way to subduing or reducing intelligence.
dull
It's very boring, basically just following the protagonist's plot with no highlights.
I didn't read much, and I couldn't understand it at the beginning. Why would I write a brother to death? There is no one else who has set up the Heart of God. It all follows the plot, nothing special, and it also suppresses cultivation. Can the earth element you wrote yourself increase 100 times by practicing on the earth veins and can it be done non-stop all day long? If your cultivation level doesn't increase in one year, you couldn't write it because you set it too high because you want to grow too fast, right?
I removed it. If you don't like others, I like Tang Yue.
There's nothing interesting about the single female protagonist. I don't want to see it.
How to put it, I will comment on two sentences, plus the previous two sentences, after I finish.
There is no need to write about it. Why the fuck did you become a baby when you traveled through the past? The *** is the third dimension. Did you physically travel to the second dimension? It was also picked up by the protagonist's family at the beginning. Does the protagonist's family have the money to raise another baby? The reason for adoption is because Mo Fan's father and Mo He Xinxia's mother are together, not because Mo Jiaxin is kind. He wants to be kind and has gone to the orphanage to adopt children. Why is the protagonist forced to adopt and not follow logic? A novel without its own logic can attract readers by fantasy.
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