
Something's Wrong with My Narration
About This Novel
As a senior who was unemployed after graduation, Zhou Zhi was attending an interview when a narration suddenly appeared and broke his peaceful life. [Attention, this man's name is Zhou Zhi. He is about to miss an important interview because of Zhou Gong's daughter's request to stay. [Bus No. 38 Will arrive in one minute. If Zhou Zhi wants to take the bus, you may need to run. [Stupid Zhou Zhiyou, can't you see that this is a two-hundred-year-old little lolita? ... The originally ordinary life began to become exciting (weird) because of the appearance of the narrator. When he looked back, he realized that his life had changed beyond recognition.
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Official(4)Scraped 8d ago
Please improve the protagonist's IQ
There is a better solution in the first chapter. The protagonist has to use the most stupid escape method. With the protagonist's ability, using the police as a weapon will definitely kill everyone. After all, this is a legal society, and the word "invincible" has been engraved on the protagonist's forehead.
Can you, what the hell do you want to write? It's the earliest routine, it's so embarrassing to watch.
The plot feels a bit like a finished urban immortal novel
Is the author young?
I can't stand it at all, the whole article is full of childish thoughts
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Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 8d ago
Please improve the protagonist's IQ
There is a better solution in the first chapter. The protagonist has to use the most stupid escape method. With the protagonist's ability, using the police as a weapon will definitely kill everyone. After all, this is a legal society, and the word "invincible" has been engraved on the protagonist's forehead.
Can you, what the hell do you want to write? It's the earliest routine, it's so embarrassing to watch.
The plot feels a bit like a finished urban immortal novel
Is the author young?
I can't stand it at all, the whole article is full of childish thoughts









