Weird Invasion: I, Wong Tai Sin is Reborn at the Beginning
by Joyoung
About This Novel
Traveling through a parallel and strange world, Huang Can was transformed into a pure white and yellow skin. After seven or forty-nine attempts to seek the title, he made a grand ambition: I, Huang Can, vow to become an immortal, but I will never seek the title again!
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Official(21)Scraped 13d ago
Same as the book friends above, the ocean, you are really water. Every time you roll your fingers and glance at it, it's all nonsense. What you see is that your desire is gone. You can't hold on and leave.
Too much nonsense
One or two pages are all about describing There's no sense of immersion at all.
The sea, you are full of water, really good water
There is too much nonsense in the detailed description. In fact, it is unnecessary. Anyone who likes to read knows some things. You have described too many details. ⭐
That's too long-winded, Zhen Shui, it's all nonsense.
(·_·)
The main character is useless, and the plot is a bit bland. The scary scenes are not scary, they are just narrated. The main character had a blast once, and after reading more than a hundred chapters, I gave up.
If nothing else, I just want to ask the author
Who in Honghuang do you look down on? To achieve sainthood through meritorious deeds, you must know that the Taoist ancestors had to recruit disciples and help Sanqing Nuwa and others to become saints. Your merits have now made you a saint. Is your system the Great Way? Aren't you just fooling around? You have to be reasonable and well-founded, at least what you say makes sense, and if you push too hard from the beginning, the back court will collapse.
. . . . . . .
This protagonist is really bad, read these previous chapters
A bit anti-human! !
No sense of immersion at all! Although you traveled through time and became a yellow-skinned man, you were still a human before. Even if you don't regard yourself as a human being, you still have some merit in saving people! But you look at people's death as if it doesn't matter! Why do people believe in this? ? So speechless
Throw away the watermelon and pick up the sesame seeds
To evaluate it, the logic and plot are not coherent. I just write whatever comes to my mind like a flowing composition. There is no emphasis on description or foreshadowing. The portrayal of the protagonist is like a loser.
Seeing how much you have written, I won't criticize you either.
Let's give it a medium one. The main thing is that it has a little bit of water.
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Official(21)Scraped 13d ago
Same as the book friends above, the ocean, you are really water. Every time you roll your fingers and glance at it, it's all nonsense. What you see is that your desire is gone. You can't hold on and leave.
Too much nonsense
One or two pages are all about describing There's no sense of immersion at all.
The sea, you are full of water, really good water
There is too much nonsense in the detailed description. In fact, it is unnecessary. Anyone who likes to read knows some things. You have described too many details. ⭐
That's too long-winded, Zhen Shui, it's all nonsense.
(·_·)
The main character is useless, and the plot is a bit bland. The scary scenes are not scary, they are just narrated. The main character had a blast once, and after reading more than a hundred chapters, I gave up.
If nothing else, I just want to ask the author
Who in Honghuang do you look down on? To achieve sainthood through meritorious deeds, you must know that the Taoist ancestors had to recruit disciples and help Sanqing Nuwa and others to become saints. Your merits have now made you a saint. Is your system the Great Way? Aren't you just fooling around? You have to be reasonable and well-founded, at least what you say makes sense, and if you push too hard from the beginning, the back court will collapse.
. . . . . . .
This protagonist is really bad, read these previous chapters
A bit anti-human! !
No sense of immersion at all! Although you traveled through time and became a yellow-skinned man, you were still a human before. Even if you don't regard yourself as a human being, you still have some merit in saving people! But you look at people's death as if it doesn't matter! Why do people believe in this? ? So speechless
Throw away the watermelon and pick up the sesame seeds
To evaluate it, the logic and plot are not coherent. I just write whatever comes to my mind like a flowing composition. There is no emphasis on description or foreshadowing. The portrayal of the protagonist is like a loser.
Seeing how much you have written, I won't criticize you either.
Let's give it a medium one. The main thing is that it has a little bit of water.
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