
Douluo: the System Came Too Early, the Mission is Too Outrageous
About This Novel
Elements of this book: [Entry System] + [Martial Spirit Eternal Tree] + [Tang San kills Yu Xiaogang] + [Hairless Baboon Tang San] In the sixth year of traveling through Douluo Continent, Zhang Chi finally waited for his golden finger - but there seemed to be something wrong with the system. It seemed to have arrived thirty years too early. Looking at the outrageous tasks displayed on the system panel, Zhang Chi's face was full of question marks. [Sweeping the graves of dead parents will reward you with an entry stripping opportunity 1...] [Looking for the remnants of Wuhun Palace, the opportunity to draw reward entries...] [Contact the forgotten genius...] [Find Qian Renxue, whose godhood was shattered, and rebuild the Spirit Hall among the ruins...] After looking at the above tasks, Zhang Chi couldn't help but look back at his mother who was washing dishes nearby. "How should I visit my parents' graves when I have both parents?" Ps: This book is also called [The system came thirty years earlier, and I was forced to rebuild the Spirit Hall as a young man] [There are too many negative entries, I raised Tang San to be a hairless baboon] [The Eternal Tree of Martial Spirits, I created the Eternal Kingdom of God]
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Official(36)Scraped 2d ago
Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it!
Personally, I feel that the person least worth saving in Dou Yizhong is Xiao Wu! Knowing her identity, she had to go to the big city to wander around. Ah Yin, who is almost level 60, is not as strong as her! She has to stir up trouble, for fear that others won't notice her. She has lived for at least several thousand years, and she still doesn't know how to write the word "low profile"🤐
Departure Departure
A new book is on the way, and I beg to read it. Dear adoptive fathers, if you see something unreasonable or illogical, you can point it out directly. I will make modifications as appropriate after seeing it. This book uses the world view of animation. For example: In the anime, you can fly in the banned realm. In the original work, the level 98 Golden Crocodile Douluo had no choice but to stay on the city wall and watch the Tiandou Empire's army attack because he had no flying soul skills. In addition, content such as golden liquid is definitely not included in this book. The content of Qian Renxue's divine test will be written according to the details of the animation.
The progress of the plot is too slow. Ever since the Ancient Tree Martial Spirit was created, what has been written about are the various components and developments between the forces. These contents only have a small climax of the plot of killing Tang Hao. After that, the rest is about the formation of various forces, various relationships and so on. It is too slow.
Author, you forgot something in the latest chapter. Before Tang San died, he should plunder the entries for the twin spirits. Didn't you say that before? , Have you forgotten?
The content of the plot is quite interesting. From the very beginning, the God King of Tang Dynasty fucked the good-for-nothing Yu Xiaogang. It was not like other fanfics where he repeatedly tortured the master and apprentice before letting them die. Now there is still the God King of Tang Dynasty and I look forward to the follow-up content. Unfortunately, there are not enough updates and it is not interesting at all.
Well, not bad, not bad, one moon viewing ticket and nine recommendation tickets. 👍
Chapter 27: Death of Yu Xiaogang Chapter 28: Bibi Dong: Xiaogang is dead, and I no longer care about right and wrong. Destroy the city
I'm here to help you write, and the author will update quickly
It's okay, but it looks a little awkward
It can be the waste-chai style. The main thing about the fei-chai style is that it has no worries and is all about calculation. It takes everything it can get. The golden finger is a bit messy. The tank was offline too early, and a lot of the fun was lost. It's too early for Tang San to go offline. It's better to be happy.
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Community(0)
Official(36)Scraped 2d ago
Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it!
Personally, I feel that the person least worth saving in Dou Yizhong is Xiao Wu! Knowing her identity, she had to go to the big city to wander around. Ah Yin, who is almost level 60, is not as strong as her! She has to stir up trouble, for fear that others won't notice her. She has lived for at least several thousand years, and she still doesn't know how to write the word "low profile"🤐
Departure Departure
A new book is on the way, and I beg to read it. Dear adoptive fathers, if you see something unreasonable or illogical, you can point it out directly. I will make modifications as appropriate after seeing it. This book uses the world view of animation. For example: In the anime, you can fly in the banned realm. In the original work, the level 98 Golden Crocodile Douluo had no choice but to stay on the city wall and watch the Tiandou Empire's army attack because he had no flying soul skills. In addition, content such as golden liquid is definitely not included in this book. The content of Qian Renxue's divine test will be written according to the details of the animation.
The progress of the plot is too slow. Ever since the Ancient Tree Martial Spirit was created, what has been written about are the various components and developments between the forces. These contents only have a small climax of the plot of killing Tang Hao. After that, the rest is about the formation of various forces, various relationships and so on. It is too slow.
Author, you forgot something in the latest chapter. Before Tang San died, he should plunder the entries for the twin spirits. Didn't you say that before? , Have you forgotten?
The content of the plot is quite interesting. From the very beginning, the God King of Tang Dynasty fucked the good-for-nothing Yu Xiaogang. It was not like other fanfics where he repeatedly tortured the master and apprentice before letting them die. Now there is still the God King of Tang Dynasty and I look forward to the follow-up content. Unfortunately, there are not enough updates and it is not interesting at all.
Well, not bad, not bad, one moon viewing ticket and nine recommendation tickets. 👍
Chapter 27: Death of Yu Xiaogang Chapter 28: Bibi Dong: Xiaogang is dead, and I no longer care about right and wrong. Destroy the city
I'm here to help you write, and the author will update quickly
It's okay, but it looks a little awkward
It can be the waste-chai style. The main thing about the fei-chai style is that it has no worries and is all about calculation. It takes everything it can get. The golden finger is a bit messy. The tank was offline too early, and a lot of the fun was lost. It's too early for Tang San to go offline. It's better to be happy.













