Life in the Courtyard

In the early stage, it was reasonable and well-founded, and it seemed quite immersive. But later on, it started to collapse. I just stared at the people in the courtyard and wrote it. There were no good original characters or plots. I felt that it fell apart from the plot of Qin almost being raped. It made me sick. , The protagonist still has some brains and personality in the early stage, but later on he becomes like a Muggle, directly reducing his intelligence, and the system is dispensable. When the writing is out of the plot, he just lets go. The author has to force it back by himself, and then let the protagonist participate, and pull back and forth there.

I found some photos of Hao Lei, so I'll post a few first.

A pig's trotters that are just like a stupid pig can control everything and make it easy for you to live in retirement? What a loser! Minions!

60 years, 16 years old, why not go to school, have a system, and have savings. You can keep the job or sell it directly. If you study systematically and review for a year, you can go directly to the high school entrance examination or university. As for how to enter the school, it requires money. Isn't it more comfortable to be assigned work in 1965 than to work in a workshop? The rolling mill was dirty and tired. The system you want to learn as a bonus is almost the same. Don't study if there is such a system. Are there any modern people so stupid?

After reading Chapter 139, I suddenly lost interest. Why? The front part is actually quite attractive. Originally, when I traveled through time in the beginning and had a golden finger, I was no longer an ordinary person. I even went to become a disciple and find a backer, so I was very persuaded to quit. Later, I went to flirt with a salesperson who had a little background and was average-looking. Considering this background, it is not a matter of falling in love now and breaking up if it is not suitable. This is acceptable. However, for ten or twenty chapters in a row, the protagonist just takes the lead and brushes it off. He spends a lot of space describing nonsense that has any relationship with the protagonist. This is also a common problem in most courtyard novels, and the system is also dispensable. What's attractive at the beginning is that the author carefully checked some background information, and then added that the writing style is okay, but the overall outline is really average.

According to the inferences of many authors and readers, Jia Dongxu is most likely not the kind of person who cheats, cheats, eats, and is lazy, but is probably an honest person who gets bullied. This is well-founded. Most of the sons raised by strong single mothers are honest children. The son of Ms. Ge X Dong is the most typical example. If Xiao Jia is the kind of person who is out of tune, a cunning person like Yi Zhonghai will definitely not train Xiao Jia as the first person in the retirement care sequence.

The writing is good, at least as an author standing in the middle position to evaluate the people in the courtyard, and the logic is self-consistent. Unlike some novels that are too violent and full of beasts in the courtyard, some of them don't even check the basic information and are full of loopholes.

Why did you say that? A widow with too much scheming and no moral bottom line! There are many people who defend her. . Stupid

It doesn't look good, there are no quotation marks in the words, the plot is written like a composition, and I have to write a long paragraph in each chapter to express my gratitude. The science popularization is the most uncomfortable to write in the middle. I am very annoyed when I hear it. Let's read the novel. Who wants to read your science popularization stuff?

Rubbish, the dialogue has no punctuation, and I didn't go to elementary school.