Douluo: the Awakening Beast

When will Zhao Wuji be wiped out?

Stop at hugging Ye Lingling Let me start by saying: 1: The main plot is unclear, and it is not clear what the protagonist is going to do. 2: Regarding the protagonist's mentality changing many times, in fact, these changes are useless. The protagonist's mentality has not changed at all. He has been flying around like a headless fly, not knowing what his purpose is? Don't know what you want to do? Should we pay more or become stronger? 3: Feelings come out of nowhere 4: Details of content and introduction 5: The author does not have an outline. It can be concluded that he writes whatever comes to his mind. 6: Regarding revenge, the protagonist takes it for granted. He feels that he will definitely be able to get revenge, and he also writes about hatred. In those ten years, he has taken it lightly and only has resentment in his heart. He also asked those three why, why should I? Just because you are too weak, just because you have no strength, just because your protagonist's parents wanted to join in the fun. If your parents didn't join in the fun, would they have died? You asked yourself why those three people are so weak, why should weak people be like ants? Just because you are weak! 7: The protagonist's character is indecisive and has no opinion. 8: The golden finger given is too restrictive. Even if there are restrictions, it can still improve the strength quickly, but it depends on what he has done. 9: In short, the author's writing skills are too weak and he cannot control it, and he cannot understand the feeling of killing one's relatives (of course, we are in a society ruled by law, so we cannot understand it even if we want to). Moreover, the author did not make an outline, it is just random writing. Also, the author has previously posted a leaflet saying that he wants to write a story from his heart. This is not to cater to readers. But in fact, if you ask the author to review it by himself and start from the beginning, do you think he can read it? I guess he can't even read it himself, and he will also have thoughts about how I could write like this at that time.

The front part is too sloppy, it doesn't look full of hatred. Dian Wei's lines are also domineering, such as If you are not crazy, you will not survive! Fight, make me forget the madness! Stay away from me! Get relief! Bleeding makes me forget the madness! Can you feel the pain? Who will be liberated first? You? Or me? Totally crazy! Death, a moment of peace! Killing, unstoppable

What did you write? The combat power has been destroyed. When fighting the Wuhun Team, it was instantly defeated. When fighting the Star Luo Empire, it was very difficult. Tang San had more scenes in the Soul Master Competition. Ye Lengleng had more benefits than the protagonist. Tell me who is the protagonist and who is the supporting role? I'm really convinced. I was looking forward to this title when I saw it, but the writing was a mess. I'm convinced.

Damn it, I haven't been killed yet and I won't take revenge if my family is killed.

I didn't see the evil person. Who did he kill decisively? Killing slaves when he was young? Or is it the first time to kill the dragon in the spirit arena? In addition, when Zhao Wuji cut off his arm, a Soul Saint, who was chased by the Wuhun Palace and survived, almost died in a sneak attack? It's better to use a weapon that opens and closes like an axe. Even if Douluo is a fantasy sewer, an ordinary person will have a certain sense of danger after a long life and death fight. When I first watched it, I thought the revenge scene was to find someone to help, or to defeat it all at once. Wanfa kind of thing. I personally think that if you want to set up this kind of character, the protagonist will feel different when using a sword and a dagger. To be honest, it doesn't feel that way when you write it. I also saw that more than 80 chapters are too sloppy. Maybe it's a new writer. I'll check it out later. Come on.

The plot always feels inexplicable, and the God of War level is not high, right?

Your complex facial features cannot hide your simple IQ

I still join the group when I have a grudge. I don't understand. I'm either hostile or cowardly. This makes it a bit unbearable in the early stage.

With this ability of the protagonist, go to the killing city and kill a wave of people and take off immediately.