Pokémon Dragon King

There is no big problem with the description of all aspects of the writing, but the most interesting parts about training, combat, and skill mastery are really written like shit. It is better not to write about combat. I vomited that I could only use 4 skills in the gym battle. As a time traveler, it can be said that there is basically no training in skills. Have you watched the first season of the anime? Can't we refer to the training methods of pangolin boys? Don't you need to train skill combos or reasonable combinations of skills? I seriously doubt that you have just played the game. The combat description is completely based on the turn system in the game. Your skills have passed and his skills have come over. I recommend you to read the characteristic master and wait for some novels about Pokémon to see how they arrange training and combat. I recommend this book to be a eunuch. Read more good books written by others and learn from them🙄🙄🙄

It takes Magikarp 50 chapters to evolve at the beginning, and a Quasi-God evolves just as slowly in more than ten chapters. Later, Charmander is conquered, and the first battle takes more than 30 chapters. Mainly because Magikarp has a hard time retaining people at the beginning.

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There is indeed nothing wrong with the writing, but... The progress is too slow, and let's not talk about Magikarp. It's too bland. It's hard to retain people when it's written like this in the early stage. I only read more than 20 chapters and stopped reading. It's too bland and simple, and to be honest, starting with Magikarp is really not good, even if you are a poor trainer. But don't forget who you are. Where are your elves? Didn't you bring anyone here? All right! If you didn't pay attention, it was soul penetration. Then it's okay. Even the body is not yours, let alone the elf. You are careless.

It's a miracle to be alive when you go out with a Magikarp that hits + water splashes and goes out into the wild. Even if the Pokémon world is relatively peaceful, don't be so outrageous. Then came the battle. What kind of restricted 4 skills were there? I was speechless. I finally resisted the poison point in front. I couldn't stand it when I saw it. It was really poisonous. What's more, the entire game is already at 8% progress. It's still a Magikarp and a multi-dragon in its initial form. It hasn't challenged any gyms yet. It's also a poisonous spot that I can't stand. Also, they often talk about some in-game plots or settings, and then always follow up with "But this is only within the game, I don't know what the reality is like." Although this is indeed the case, do you want to say it several times in one chapter?

I personally feel that Adam is right if he is not crazy. It is better to rely on external things than to become a god yourself. This way no one will despise you.

In the first chapter, it was said that the protagonist is an old Pokémon player, but in terms of tactical arrangements, he can be said to be a novice. Basically, he has been beaten to grow up like a novice. If the author wants to write it like this, then don't assign this identity to the protagonist. Look at me, I feel really uncomfortable. And every time the protagonist falls down, he always grits his teeth. To this, I just want to say, if you don't know how to write, then don't use this kind of thing to count the words.

Does this book have a female protagonist? If so, is it a single female protagonist?

It is much better than some elf novels such as system lottery. Those novels feel that there is no bond between elf and human beings. As a cloud player, I can understand it a little bit. I don't know if that's right, but I seem to understand it anyway.

This is a beautiful and interesting book, a beautiful book