Dress up as a Milk Baby and Take Space with You to Escape
by Nuannuanzi
About This Novel
The family ties in her previous life were weak, and she once transformed into a girl born during a severe drought. As her memory gradually recovered, she followed her family on the road to escape. The family in this life is different from the past. No one dislikes her for being a girl, and everyone treats her as a treasure. Even if the conditions on the escape route are difficult, they all stick to her for food and clothing. So Xu Zhaoyu is moved in his heart, unlocks the space on the mountain in his previous life, and leads the family to eat well. Sweet potatoes as big as your head, white potatoes full of juice, and those flying on the ground, whatever she has on the mountain, she will donate them all! By the way, I also picked up a little brother! Pamper her all the way! She wants to be the brightest cub on the road to escape!
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Official(4)Scraped 12d ago
It's great that a junior high school student can write such a novel. At least the writing is smooth.
very nice
It's a bit unkind to read as a travel article, but I like it😍
Who has seen it?
Hail Mary? Travel article? Have you read the comments?
Written to the author, I hope this article can become better.
The escape was pretty good at the beginning, but later on it started to get messy and the chapters were messy. Some contents appeared very suddenly. For example, there was an ox cart suddenly, and the kang technology was suddenly mentioned. The time was also messed up, and just after dinner, everyone was sitting around the table again. The description of the characters was not full enough, and sometimes this person was good and sometimes he was bad. The description of the abilities of the three men in the big family is very impressive. One of them suddenly learned kung fu. When he was escaping from famine, the male protagonist learned kung fu. When he settled down, he focused on studying. Kung fu was not even mentioned or practiced. As a result, there is no continuity in reading. I even only remember the grandmother and the heroine's family of three in the protagonist's family. The other characters are very mixed. One moment they are superb in martial arts, and the other are good at business. The same goes for the male protagonist, who should have a very noble status, but there is no description of his growth. He only revolves around the female protagonist. He is also a child. It is impossible for him to suddenly strategize and have power in the later stage, right? The sense of presence in the big family is very low. The description of each storyline is not detailed enough, and it ends quickly, as if it is rushing to catch up with the progress, without explaining the beginning and end. There is no coherence and I can't connect it. I read it for a day and I just can't read it anymore. I can't connect it in my mind.
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Official(4)Scraped 12d ago
It's great that a junior high school student can write such a novel. At least the writing is smooth.
very nice
It's a bit unkind to read as a travel article, but I like it😍
Who has seen it?
Hail Mary? Travel article? Have you read the comments?
Written to the author, I hope this article can become better.
The escape was pretty good at the beginning, but later on it started to get messy and the chapters were messy. Some contents appeared very suddenly. For example, there was an ox cart suddenly, and the kang technology was suddenly mentioned. The time was also messed up, and just after dinner, everyone was sitting around the table again. The description of the characters was not full enough, and sometimes this person was good and sometimes he was bad. The description of the abilities of the three men in the big family is very impressive. One of them suddenly learned kung fu. When he was escaping from famine, the male protagonist learned kung fu. When he settled down, he focused on studying. Kung fu was not even mentioned or practiced. As a result, there is no continuity in reading. I even only remember the grandmother and the heroine's family of three in the protagonist's family. The other characters are very mixed. One moment they are superb in martial arts, and the other are good at business. The same goes for the male protagonist, who should have a very noble status, but there is no description of his growth. He only revolves around the female protagonist. He is also a child. It is impossible for him to suddenly strategize and have power in the later stage, right? The sense of presence in the big family is very low. The description of each storyline is not detailed enough, and it ends quickly, as if it is rushing to catch up with the progress, without explaining the beginning and end. There is no coherence and I can't connect it. I read it for a day and I just can't read it anymore. I can't connect it in my mind.
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