The Yandere Proton Hooks up with Me, the Source of My Grievance is Actually Myself

The Yandere Proton Hooks up with Me, the Source of My Grievance is Actually Myself

by Squatting In Front Of The Grave And Crying

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[Princess wearing a book + slightly yandere, working hard to survive while pursuing a career VS imprisoned black prince of an enemy country] Feng Xiangwan, the seventh most beloved princess of the current Empress Jokhang. She was a romantic and notorious person, and everyone expected her to die. Before passing through, Feng Xiangwan also looked forward to his own death. But after passing through, she was afraid of the man who had been tortured by her to a state of complete indignity, bruises all over his body, blood and flesh, gritting his teeth and holding back without saying a word. Because she knew that in the future, he would come back to eat her alive, cut her into pieces with thousands of knives, and whip her corpse countless times... "Wanwan, the sky is ruthless, the mountains are peaceful, so I dare to fight with you!" She looked at the affectionate promise of the handsome man who took the initiative to stay in her arms, sometimes good and sometimes bad, sometimes gentle and sometimes violent. Feng Xiangwan: "..." Something seems wrong...

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I have read it from beginning to end, and after thinking about it, I still want to say something. When I first clicked on this book, I really liked the ancient novel about princesses and protons. After reading the first few chapters, I thought the writing was good. There was no big problem with the wording and sentence making. The heroine was also pretty good, and she was quite resourceful after traveling through time. The main thing is that the male protagonist's character really attracts me. He is a lonely, young and suffering little proton who is already heartbroken. Especially this proton is very, very good-looking! And it's not like other stories where the heroine treats him for two days and then immediately starts to care about the heroine. Until now, he has been frail, sick and silent, with a lot of psychological trauma. He is very real and fragile, so I was attracted to him at a glance. After that, I quickly added to the bookshelves and started reading, but as I read, I started to feel that something was wrong. The signs of something wrong started when Bai Nanzhi frequently appeared, begging to be spoiled and bullying the male protagonist. As for the female protagonist, the heroine's tolerance for him was unprecedented. Not only did she become soft-hearted because of his beauty, but she also had many psychological activities such as "I like you best" and "This man really needs to be coaxed". No matter how stupid, bad or capable of being a monster, he was protected in various ways. I don't think there's any problem with writing a male supporting actor who plays a major role. It's fine if it's written as a sister-brother relationship or something like that. But for Bai Nanzhi, if I hadn't known that the copywriter said he was the male protagonist, I'd probably be able to make sense of it. The key is who is Bai Nanzhi? He is just a male favorite who cares about others. He sheds tears every day without saying a word. He is full of nothing but being jealous and jealous of the heroine. He is incompetent in literature and martial arts. He is coquettish and timid and is more feminine than a woman. He is not kind-hearted, and just like someone with bipolar disorder, he can be instigated by anyone, taken advantage of by anyone, unable to do anything, and ranked first in incompetence and rage. Phew... I'm really angry. He was calling the male protagonist a swordsman in his heart, both secretly and overtly. The scoldings were as unpleasant as they were, and he felt that the male protagonist was nothing. When he was the most noble person in the world, did he ever think about who he was? The male protagonist Li You is still the prince of Li country no matter what, but what about him? He's just a male favorite, he's nothing outside the princess' mansion! He even insulted the deceased mother who was the only one the hero cared about over and over again. He had no basic bottom line as a human being. The heroine should not look at the person she was protecting. What kind of person was he who she thought was cute? After listening to Hua Rongyue's plan, he pretended to show favor to Li You and get closer to her, but Li You was cold to him. He directly uttered evil words, flipped the table off and scratched the male protagonist's face. When the heroine came, he was the most pitiful. It was because he cared about Li You and Li You didn't appreciate it. He was so angry that he accidentally opened it. As for the wound, he didn't want to do it. It was Li You who was unlucky to be scratched by a piece of porcelain. But should he think about why Li You ignored him? Should I still welcome a person who has bullied me since childhood and often beat, scolded and humiliated me with a smile? Unjust? When the heroine was traveling to investigate a case and was preoccupied with business matters, Bai Nanzhi was thinking that the princess must love me the most. When the prime minister was observing and testing the heroine, Bai Nanzhi was thinking: Ah, the princess is with the prime minister again and I'm so jealous. Am I not as good as the prime minister in the eyes of the princess? Balabalabala. That's it? Does this kind of thing deserve so much space to write about? He also used wheel-telling to express his psychological activities: He originally thought that the princess would..., But every time he... The princess would..., This time he..., The princess must not want him, and the princess must punish him severely, right? He knelt on the ground anxiously waiting for the punishment from the princess. Anyway, I wrote the story about the wheel over and over again. In the end, the princess smiled gently when she saw his little face turned pale or the corners of his eyes were red, or she helped him get up and was moved in any way. At the end, he added a sentence that everything was the sword man's fault (male protagonist). I can feel that you want to write him as cute and cute, but I really don't think he is cute, I just think he is stupid and bad. Writing such a supporting character jumping up and down in half of the article is really bad. Especially the interaction between the heroine and him. Knowing that this man likes her, she still resorts to coaxing him. I almost thought you were going to write a 1v2. But I really can't bear to read this article. It's rare that I like the characters of both the male and female protagonists. It would be a pity to give up because of a supporting character (ಥ_ಥ) In fact, I understand very well why Bai Nanzhi has such a character. He was never a prince, or was brought up as a man's favorite. His original personality was moody, he did all kinds of bad things, and he humiliated and scolded the male protagonist. It's not normal for Bai Nanzhi to cater to the princess and imitate her. I passed, but I feel that since he is such a character, he cannot afford such a long and lengthy description. It is boring without any shining points. The most important thing is that he has no improvement or change for more than a hundred chapters, which is counterproductive.

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