Mountain and Sea Royal Beast

More than forty chapters are about poisoning people to death. The first part is okay. The inexplicable and abrupt twists require you to work hard. Now you work hard for this and then for that. Now that you can enter Xingtian University, why not start the plot after you have the breathing method? I can't increase my strength, but I can kill enemies through levels👎

The writing style is a bit weird. There is no sense of grandeur and vastness like mountains, seas, and wilderness. Instead, the writing style gave me a faint weird feeling of a horror novel. The plot transition is a bit jerky, and the plot development is also a bit different from other novels. . The most important thing is the novel about exotic beasts in the Classic of Mountains and Seas genre. In addition to the exotic beasts being a major attraction, the adventure in the wilderness is also an extremely important attraction. On these two points, the author describes very little, especially the description of the scenes, which has no sense of substitution. Poor writing style The writing (especially the description of the scene) is poor - the dialogue (I felt it was a bit weird when I read it) is poor The plot transition is too abrupt (poor) The description of the strange beasts (for those who have never played Paranoia Mountains and Seas, it is completely impossible to imagine their general appearance based on the description) is poor. (The reason for giving it five stars is that among similar books on mountains, seas and strange beasts, it is the only one that I can barely read.) In the end, the writing style does not have the simple, vast, grand and vast feeling of the wilderness at all, and the description of the wild scenes does not have that unique and surprising feeling, it is ordinary. People who have played Delusion Mountains and Seas may be able to read it reluctantly, while people who have never played it may not be able to read it at all. (I am very disappointed, alas!)

Tyrant Zhou's appearance is a bit embarrassing. It has a beginning and no end. Those chapters are very confusing for readers. Can you change it?

Mindless. I don't know how to say it at all, so I catch a cold here and there. It's so cool to play this character.

Why is it that chapter 95 is still sixty years of cultivation, and chapter 96 is the first day of junior high school that is seventy years of cultivation?

Are you dreaming of mountains and seas? Very much like this game.

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To be honest, my previous writing was not very good. Your logic for writing an aboriginal protagonist is okay, but your logic for a time traveler protagonist is different. The reader seems to think that this protagonist has a low IQ. To be honest, as long as the time traveler has a mentality different from that of the indigenous people, your protagonist made me see it He is sensible, doesn't spend money recklessly, is filial, and doesn't see any other bright spots. In fact, it would be better to add a plot where the protagonist fights bravely when he is more than 10 years old. It hurts to spend money when he is rich, and he is reluctant to part with it. I think these are indigenous protagonists, but the character design of the time traveler is too poor. Can I say that it is perfectly integrated into the segmentation?

There are also cliches and cliches. Although this is inevitable, it also shows that the author's writing style is not very good.

Quality. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh