Covering the Sky, I Pick up Ruthless People in the Ancient Forbidden Land
About This Novel
My name is Chu Heng, a small security guard under the Taishan parking lot. I like fishing. My task is very simple, my work is very easy, and in three days, I will be promoted to security captain. My peaceful life ended when a strange young man parked his BMW in my parking lot. Mount Tai collapses in front of me, but my face does not change. Death is always with me!
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Official(38)Scraped 11d ago
Found the organization
I've always wanted to see someone pick up a tough guy
Can't you write?
If you don't know how to write, then don't write. The writing will be messy and look tiring.
To be honest, I really don't know what the connection is between the title and the content.
But I don't see any similarities.
. . . .
Liar? If you don't know how to write a title, don't write it randomly
How to say it? The author's writing is too confusing
It's not clear when the protagonist traveled through time. Also, the protagonist's personality is very contradictory! What are you going to do if you want to save others after giving them the miracle medicine? It is understandable that Pang Bo gave Ye Fan the magic medicine. But why do you still want to give me a supporting role? Is it a harem?
Traveling through time without knowing the plot is particularly embarrassing for those of us who have read the original work. You can "show that you don't know much about the plot development" or "have forgotten a lot of ambiguities" as a reminder at the beginning, but you can't write that the protagonist doesn't know the plot. Because this is fan fiction. The rough plot of the original work still needs to be there, but the heroine can be snatched by the original owner's chance. Fan fiction written in this way is good. (I just mean my opinions and suggestions and nothing else)
A bit poisonous
Take Bodhi leaves to save people you don't know in Yinghuo. It's not like the protagonist doesn't know the value of bodhi leaves, so he gives them to strangers so easily.
Write it down!
Book title Introduction content Why do I look at it and it doesn't look right? ...........................
A bit messy
It's a parallel world, it can be traveled through at will, and there are many parallels, so wouldn't there be many Ye Fan, Huangtian Emperor?
It's okay, but some places are a little bit poisonous and hard to accept.
I personally think that Jiu Miao is a failure in this aspect, which makes people want to complain. The concept of becoming an immortal in one life can be said to be almost impossible in the period of covering the sky. If you have another immortal emperor to help, pretend that I didn't say it. After all, it is the method of an Immortal Emperor. Although Shi Hao did not go down to leave a way for future generations when he created it, it is still a matter after becoming an immortal. The reason why the system of covering the sky only reaches the peak of humanity is to prevent others from walking on the road after becoming an immortal. Only one person can become an Immortal Emperor. Only follow your own system after you become an immortal. No matter how you create it in the early stage, it will be much worse than the method of covering the sky. Unless you are in a place similar to the fairy world, where there is a continuous supply of immortality substances to keep you alive, becoming an immortal in one life is just nonsense.
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Community(0)
Official(38)Scraped 11d ago
Found the organization
I've always wanted to see someone pick up a tough guy
Can't you write?
If you don't know how to write, then don't write. The writing will be messy and look tiring.
To be honest, I really don't know what the connection is between the title and the content.
But I don't see any similarities.
. . . .
Liar? If you don't know how to write a title, don't write it randomly
How to say it? The author's writing is too confusing
It's not clear when the protagonist traveled through time. Also, the protagonist's personality is very contradictory! What are you going to do if you want to save others after giving them the miracle medicine? It is understandable that Pang Bo gave Ye Fan the magic medicine. But why do you still want to give me a supporting role? Is it a harem?
Traveling through time without knowing the plot is particularly embarrassing for those of us who have read the original work. You can "show that you don't know much about the plot development" or "have forgotten a lot of ambiguities" as a reminder at the beginning, but you can't write that the protagonist doesn't know the plot. Because this is fan fiction. The rough plot of the original work still needs to be there, but the heroine can be snatched by the original owner's chance. Fan fiction written in this way is good. (I just mean my opinions and suggestions and nothing else)
A bit poisonous
Take Bodhi leaves to save people you don't know in Yinghuo. It's not like the protagonist doesn't know the value of bodhi leaves, so he gives them to strangers so easily.
Write it down!
Book title Introduction content Why do I look at it and it doesn't look right? ...........................
A bit messy
It's a parallel world, it can be traveled through at will, and there are many parallels, so wouldn't there be many Ye Fan, Huangtian Emperor?
It's okay, but some places are a little bit poisonous and hard to accept.
I personally think that Jiu Miao is a failure in this aspect, which makes people want to complain. The concept of becoming an immortal in one life can be said to be almost impossible in the period of covering the sky. If you have another immortal emperor to help, pretend that I didn't say it. After all, it is the method of an Immortal Emperor. Although Shi Hao did not go down to leave a way for future generations when he created it, it is still a matter after becoming an immortal. The reason why the system of covering the sky only reaches the peak of humanity is to prevent others from walking on the road after becoming an immortal. Only one person can become an Immortal Emperor. Only follow your own system after you become an immortal. No matter how you create it in the early stage, it will be much worse than the method of covering the sky. Unless you are in a place similar to the fairy world, where there is a continuous supply of immortality substances to keep you alive, becoming an immortal in one life is just nonsense.
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