
Wuzhen Avenue, I Fought Through Nine Heavens and Ten Places
by Li Baijin
About This Novel
With one man and one sword, he killed all the worlds from the mortal world.
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Official(19)Scraped 8d ago
The writing is good, thank you to the author
The protagonist is decisive in killing, unlike the Holy Mother. The protagonist has a plug-in that can create martial arts from many novels in his previous life. Anyway, he can't die in the plug-in. The Yangshenren Immortal Martial Arts is also about practicing acupoints. You can also refer to the divine elephant's prison-suppressing power. The system of martial tombs, etc., Are somewhat similar to the system set by the author.
Settings are OK
The following are some of my personal views There are just some parts that are a bit uncomfortable to watch. First of all, the name of the protagonist. In the narration, he directly calls Qiye, which feels a bit inconsistent. It is better to give the full name. Also, he talks a little too much when he's killing people. In the end, there is no eye-catching plot. Although the narrative has ups and downs, it is not very big. Everything is played according to routines.
Can we stop talking so much nonsense every time we fight? It's too grinding. Just do one move and then stop and just stand and chat.
The protagonist fights to the death with his enemy. He fights once, chats for a few minutes, then fights again, and chats for a few more minutes. There is no race against time, and he keeps grinding and chirping. It feels very indifferent. He stops chatting while fighting, and then gets killed. It is very awkward and funny.
After Chapter 30, it's too watery. The first part looks great, but the second part feels like someone has changed. There's so much nonsense.
The gap between before and after is too big. The first thirty chapters are well written and decisive in killing, but the rest of the battle is full of nonsense.
Just these few chapters?
The number of chapters is a bit small and it's not satisfying to read. Do you have any similar ones that you can recommend?
Doesn't look hot-blooded
Am I the only one who feels that the author writes fight scenes and nagging?
It was put on the shelves with less than 200,000 words, and I didn't even have a testimonial about it. If I lost the PK, I was directly asked by the editor to put it on the shelves.
It's pretty cool. When did the Jinyiwei General Banner be destroyed?
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Community(0)
Official(19)Scraped 8d ago
The writing is good, thank you to the author
The protagonist is decisive in killing, unlike the Holy Mother. The protagonist has a plug-in that can create martial arts from many novels in his previous life. Anyway, he can't die in the plug-in. The Yangshenren Immortal Martial Arts is also about practicing acupoints. You can also refer to the divine elephant's prison-suppressing power. The system of martial tombs, etc., Are somewhat similar to the system set by the author.
Settings are OK
The following are some of my personal views There are just some parts that are a bit uncomfortable to watch. First of all, the name of the protagonist. In the narration, he directly calls Qiye, which feels a bit inconsistent. It is better to give the full name. Also, he talks a little too much when he's killing people. In the end, there is no eye-catching plot. Although the narrative has ups and downs, it is not very big. Everything is played according to routines.
Can we stop talking so much nonsense every time we fight? It's too grinding. Just do one move and then stop and just stand and chat.
The protagonist fights to the death with his enemy. He fights once, chats for a few minutes, then fights again, and chats for a few more minutes. There is no race against time, and he keeps grinding and chirping. It feels very indifferent. He stops chatting while fighting, and then gets killed. It is very awkward and funny.
After Chapter 30, it's too watery. The first part looks great, but the second part feels like someone has changed. There's so much nonsense.
The gap between before and after is too big. The first thirty chapters are well written and decisive in killing, but the rest of the battle is full of nonsense.
Just these few chapters?
The number of chapters is a bit small and it's not satisfying to read. Do you have any similar ones that you can recommend?
Doesn't look hot-blooded
Am I the only one who feels that the author writes fight scenes and nagging?
It was put on the shelves with less than 200,000 words, and I didn't even have a testimonial about it. If I lost the PK, I was directly asked by the editor to put it on the shelves.
It's pretty cool. When did the Jinyiwei General Banner be destroyed?





























