Honghuang: My Voice Was Overheard by Tongtian
About This Novel
Lin Chuan traveled through the world of Fengshen and became an outer disciple of Jiejiao. When the calamity of becoming a god comes, Tongtian actually allows his disciples to join the list to become a god? Lin Chuan: It's over. I can't keep Jie Jiao anymore. Run away! Tongtian: Who is speaking? How dare you curse me and seek death! Duobao appears, preparing for disaster. Lin Chuan: Soon, the senior brother who intercepts the teaching will become a Buddhist Tathagata! When Tongtian taught the Six Soul Banners of the Long-eared Dingguang Immortal. Lin Chuan: Traitor, Jiejiao will be killed by him sooner or later! ... Tongtian: Lin Chuan, is it you? !
What Readers Think
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Official(13)Scraped 17d ago
Lies
It's so watery! It takes several chapters to talk about the same thing!
Regardless of priority
The verbosity is also drunk. There are only a few lines of dialogue, which accounts for 2%. The rest are all descriptions of locations, other people's psychological activities, or descriptions of the masses. There are 98% of all kinds of complaints. It's procrastinating. It's hard to distinguish the main plot from the narration. If you have a fight with Zhao Gongming, just fight. It's just nonsense. Chapter 3 or 4, there is no real fighting content at all, so I can barely give it.
No wonder no one read it, and there were not many comments. I almost jumped out of my room after reading this. It's uncomfortable to see, it must have been written randomly.
From the title and introduction, I knew the protagonist wouldn't survive more than 1 chapter.
Excluding the articles with a low number of words, this book would probably only have four to five hundred chapters. It's too watery. There are more than 800 chapters of water coming out, which is quite impressive.
hehe
The author is really good at it! It keeps blabbering but doesn't get to the right topic. Your writing is not very good!
The presentation aspect seems to be the king.
May I ask if there is a heroine?
Needless to say
No wonder no one watched or commented on it. My toes can be lifted out of the three bedrooms and one living room. It's so uncomfortable to watch, just entertain yourself.
This book is a bit verbose in some places, and the content in the article is quite contradictory...
Rating
Community(0)
Official(13)Scraped 17d ago
Lies
It's so watery! It takes several chapters to talk about the same thing!
Regardless of priority
The verbosity is also drunk. There are only a few lines of dialogue, which accounts for 2%. The rest are all descriptions of locations, other people's psychological activities, or descriptions of the masses. There are 98% of all kinds of complaints. It's procrastinating. It's hard to distinguish the main plot from the narration. If you have a fight with Zhao Gongming, just fight. It's just nonsense. Chapter 3 or 4, there is no real fighting content at all, so I can barely give it.
No wonder no one read it, and there were not many comments. I almost jumped out of my room after reading this. It's uncomfortable to see, it must have been written randomly.
From the title and introduction, I knew the protagonist wouldn't survive more than 1 chapter.
Excluding the articles with a low number of words, this book would probably only have four to five hundred chapters. It's too watery. There are more than 800 chapters of water coming out, which is quite impressive.
hehe
The author is really good at it! It keeps blabbering but doesn't get to the right topic. Your writing is not very good!
The presentation aspect seems to be the king.
May I ask if there is a heroine?
Needless to say
No wonder no one watched or commented on it. My toes can be lifted out of the three bedrooms and one living room. It's so uncomfortable to watch, just entertain yourself.
This book is a bit verbose in some places, and the content in the article is quite contradictory...
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