Witness the Perfect World Since Ancient Times

Yu Tuo, save me! On the top of the immortal world, proud of the world, there will be heaven with me, Anlan; At the top of my words, I am persuading the world. Look at me, Quntuo, persuading immortals to die; On the top of the grave, buried in the world, waiting for me, Duan De, to dig through the sky; On the top of my father's world, my son Wang Teng can become an immortal; On the top of the dog, barking in the world, watch me, the Black Emperor, bite the immortal to death. On the top of the broken world, there will be immortals if I, Chendong, are there

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With more than two hundred chapters, it is a magical fire, and the guarantee of an era is also a supreme one. No more than a thousand photos, who in today's society would read this kind of slow and popular article, let alone a fan.

Some personal feelings after reading: 1. Slow down, the pace of reading fan fiction should be faster, otherwise it will give people the feeling that they have read the original work once and are doing it all over again. 2. Due to the slow release of the novel, there is still not much overlap with the original work even though it has four or five hundred chapters. It makes people feel that although you say it is a perfect fan, it is only specious. 3. The writing description is not clear enough. I read books at a glance. I have read many books and can connect them well even if I skip chapters. I can also roughly guess what the skipped chapters are about. This kind of reading gives people a clear and clear feeling. If you read a few paragraphs of this writing, you will not know what is going on in the middle. You are just a very slow and patient person. In my opinion, the most important thing in writing fan fiction is the protagonist's feeling of being invincible in the world, and the interaction with the original characters. Otherwise, if your writing style is not as good as other people's, and you don't bring that sense of pretentiousness to readers, how can you be so popular?

Which is more miserable, the Age of Dharma End or the Age of Chaos?

A cool article is not a cool article. What the hell is it written about? Will it take more than 800 chapters to upgrade to the first level of Shield? 😦I am not saying that all astronomical texts must be invincible and refreshing. What's the point if it's super slow? Look at the fan next door's Perfectly Cool article, which reaches the early stage of Shield One in about four to five hundred chapters. Hey, I gave up the trap

There is some water in front, so even if you jump to the back, it won't affect the front. The writing style needs to be improved, there is nothing very passionate, there are few extremely overbearing quotations, there is not much empathy, there is only the frustration of not being strong enough, you are not dominant enough in writing, and there are no special jokes in the book, or language that makes readers retain their eyesight. You can refer to the peerless mastermind and others since the beginning of the perfect world. The characters they portray are very good, and there are not many bright spots in the supporting roles to empathize with. There are no supporting roles with clear colors, touching plots, and the sadness is not well portrayed... There are various reasons why your book is lukewarm. If you use this book as a writing practice, it still needs to be improved. If you want to write, then keep at it and work hard along the way to do better and improve yourself. Maybe one day it breaks off, then you can be worthy of your own heart, right? I give you a five-star rating. This is what ordinary readers can do for you. Come on!

It's just that the content at the back is a little watery, but the rest is okay.

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I'm curious, the author's introduction to Shi Hao, also known as Huangtian Emperor, is from the beginning of the chaotic ancient times, so is there any intersection between the protagonist and Shi Hao?